Long Gone


Long time gone,
humble return,
made right wrong,
felt the burn.

Come back humble,
lesson learned,
I did not stumble,
I did get burned.

Seeing the leaves,
forgetting the roots,
seeing self leave,
missing new shoots.

Never again,
the fool I've been,
seeming insane,
error so seen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 8:13 PM
We've all been there at one time or another, my friend... as you say, '...a lesson learned. Best wishes, Keith
Nickle Read Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 8:23 PM
Thank you...thank you.
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 1:59 PM
- Whole life we have new things to learn, well written David. - Have a wonderful Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Nickle Read Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Thankyou.
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