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Long Draught

Rain
clouds
on high,
vapourise-
Yellowstone stays dry

natureplacesfibonacci

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 3, 2009 at 6:50 PM

If you're camping in Yellowstone, dry is great! But if you're a plant, that's a different story. Excellent fibonacci. I love Yellowstone. Summer 2000, my three children and I took a summer road trip. We visited 7 national parks and did a lot of camping that year. Your yellowstone poems bring back some good memories.

Elaine George

April 1, 2009 at 9:48 PM

Hi Brian, Missed you and your prolific writing. I am taking a much needed break from my novel. Lainie

Abe Lopez

March 31, 2009 at 5:09 PM

rain is always hit and miss here in Oklahoma too! great write!

Carrie Richards

March 31, 2009 at 6:52 AM

Yes....unfortunately that is happening more often, and hopefully, won't contribute to another wild fire season....another awesome image in your poem, Brian!

Robin L. Gass

March 31, 2009 at 6:02 AM

This beautiful Fibonacci so well describes the conditions in this part of the country. Sometimes it is either feast or famine. Well said, Brian! Thank you for your support1 Love, Robin