Long Draught

Rain
clouds
on high,
vapourise-
Yellowstone stays dry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/3/2009 6:50:00 PM
If you're camping in Yellowstone, dry is great! But if you're a plant, that's a different story. Excellent fibonacci. I love Yellowstone. Summer 2000, my three children and I took a summer road trip. We visited 7 national parks and did a lot of camping that year. Your yellowstone poems bring back some good memories.
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:48:00 PM
Hi Brian, Missed you and your prolific writing. I am taking a much needed break from my novel. Lainie
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:09:00 PM
rain is always hit and miss here in Oklahoma too! great write!
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:52:00 AM
Yes....unfortunately that is happening more often, and hopefully, won't contribute to another wild fire season....another awesome image in your poem, Brian!
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:02:00 AM
This beautiful Fibonacci so well describes the conditions in this part of the country. Sometimes it is either feast or famine. Well said, Brian! Thank you for your support1 Love, Robin
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:42:00 AM
Mother nature will have her way with such extremes. So well written once again. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:34:00 AM
Great organization of words, and inviting title, sweet and easy read. Love and peace
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:30:00 AM
Beautiful description. You almost make drought sound like a good thing when you describe it so eloquently. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/31/2009 3:51:00 AM
Love the title....love the last line..good work today Brian.
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