Long Draught

Rain clouds on high, vapourise- Yellowstone stays dry

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/3/2009 6:50:00 PM

If you're camping in Yellowstone, dry is great! But if you're a plant, that's a different story. Excellent fibonacci. I love Yellowstone. Summer 2000, my three children and I took a summer road trip. We visited 7 national parks and did a lot of camping that year. Your yellowstone poems bring back some good memories.

Elaine George

Date: 4/1/2009 9:48:00 PM

Hi Brian, Missed you and your prolific writing. I am taking a much needed break from my novel. Lainie

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/31/2009 5:09:00 PM

rain is always hit and miss here in Oklahoma too! great write!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/31/2009 6:52:00 AM

Yes....unfortunately that is happening more often, and hopefully, won't contribute to another wild fire season....another awesome image in your poem, Brian!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/31/2009 6:02:00 AM

This beautiful Fibonacci so well describes the conditions in this part of the country. Sometimes it is either feast or famine. Well said, Brian! Thank you for your support1 Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/31/2009 5:42:00 AM

Mother nature will have her way with such extremes. So well written once again. Love, Shar

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/31/2009 5:34:00 AM

Great organization of words, and inviting title, sweet and easy read. Love and peace

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/31/2009 5:30:00 AM

Beautiful description. You almost make drought sound like a good thing when you describe it so eloquently. Smiles from Lolita

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/31/2009 3:51:00 AM

Love the title....love the last line..good work today Brian.