Long Days

Long Days              ( for Kate )

I measured the time between breathing
I counted all the days that you were leaving
Long before you had gone
Saying goodbye without a word
Warning me in a silence I never heard

And the days are not endless
But no-one remembers
How the hours could fly
Counting every second as they passage by
Before the days grew long
And before you “never” said goodbye 

Did you measure the time of a life time
Pithless and fickle in your own soul
Already seeing the days when you would not be mine
And were these words behind all your kisses
He still misses me, 
Still

And the days are not countless
But days still no-one remembers
How through every hour I could try
Not to count the hours as they pass by
Before the days grew long
And before you “ever” said goodbye

I never thought in my strength I would find my weakness
Vacant spaces left so defenseless 
Broken on the back of every sunrise
I look in the mirror and all I can see are your eyes
Musing and bemused on loss

And the days are not faceless
Just full of faces that no-one remembers
Even though my soul knows my heart can fly
It lays wingless and it just won’t try
To elevate the dreams passing
In these days that grew too long

Before you said goodbye

And one day you may wake up and try too hard to forget my name
Might look in the mirror and feel the same
It maybe a smile but you will wonder why
Why it is your heart can’t fly

And on that day your strength will become your weakness
And the past will become so completely nameless
Saying goodbye without a word
And leave you in a silence that you never heard
Counting all the hours that have passed us by
Before that day grows far too long
You’ll question why you ever said goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 23, 2009 at 11:28 PM
Colin, congrats on your feature...Raul
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May 23, 2009 at 4:05 PM
Congrats Colin on "Long Days" being featured. Vince
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May 22, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Collin, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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May 22, 2009 at 7:51 AM
A very passionate piece. I love every bit of the lines. You are such a great poet… keep writing with your passionate pen. Congrats on a well deserved feature. leke
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May 19, 2009 at 2:27 PM
Great poem Colin, congrats on being featured, James
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May 19, 2009 at 7:02 AM
So many, many fine lines in this one. The poem rings true, perhaps for many people. For this reason, a whole bunch will love your write. Congrats on this fine peice. Love, daver
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May 18, 2009 at 7:52 PM
Well done, Colin. Such a heart wrenching poem, so well deserving to be a featured write this week! Congratulations..!
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May 18, 2009 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations Colin on your incredible poetry being featured this week and every week! Yeehaw!!! Love, Shar
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May 18, 2009 at 3:19 AM
Colin, congratulations on your featured poem week. Ernilando
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