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Long Day For Mrs Whisker

After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker
Heaved a sigh, and perched on her comfy chair, 
Held Earl Grey in one hand, book on other 
An heirloom tea-pot right beside her. 

After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker, 
Flowers on the vase, delightful they are! 
The antique clock sweetly chimes the hour..
The standing lamp lights brightly for her. 

After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker,
Shiny yellow curtains she did admire!
Dreams of a future when she would retire,
Rest beside window, enjoy for ever!

After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker, 
Lovely books would be fun to share! 
What a heavenly bliss that would be!
When she will invite all her friends to tea! 

Her favourite picture, she loves so dear, 
A painting on wall - tranquil nature!
Moment to cherish, moment to treasure,
After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker!



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Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/18/2024 10:58:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/cute write. I am ready for a cup of tea... Have a blessed day/week..................... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2024 10:22:00 AM Delightful to see your nursery rhyme on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K Login to Reply

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 8/15/2024 11:15:00 PM Dear Mala Congrats on your top win! Love the mention of Earl Grey, clock and the rest after work! Great imagination! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/16/2024 6:33:00 AM Thank you, Krish! Writing for children is fun! And I find many other poets here enjoy writing nursery rhymes! including you!!!

Tom Woody Date: 8/1/2024 8:30:00 AM Nothing like curling up with a good book and sipping Earl Grey after a long, hard day. Very nice Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/1/2024 5:15:00 PM Dear Tom, How can I thank you enough for reading three of my humble poems, and commenting too! Really appreciate your encouraging and kind words - I even picked up the brand-name "Earl Grey" from your comment, and added it to my poem! So thanks a lot! Warm wishes ~

Laura Leiser Date: 7/26/2024 7:55:00 PM This is a delightful poem, Malabika! Enjoyed it and good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/28/2024 4:10:00 PM Thank you so much, Laura. Appreciate your encouraging comment.