Long Day For Mrs Whisker

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July 24, 2024

"Nursery Rhymes" Poetry Contest (Not more than 10 syllables in each line)

Sponsor: Eve Roper

FIRST PLACE

After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker Heaved a sigh, and perched on her comfy chair, Held Earl Grey in one hand, book on other An heirloom tea-pot right beside her. After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker, Flowers on the vase, delightful they are! The antique clock sweetly chimes the hour.. The standing lamp lights brightly for her. After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker, Shiny yellow curtains she did admire! Dreams of a future when she would retire, Rest beside window, enjoy for ever! After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker, Lovely books would be fun to share! What a heavenly bliss that would be! When she will invite all her friends to tea! Her favourite picture, she loves so dear, A painting on wall - tranquil nature! Moment to cherish, moment to treasure, After a long day of work, Mrs. Whisker! Picture 1

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/cute write. I am ready for a cup of tea... Have a blessed day/week.....................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2024 10:22:00 AM

Delightful to see your nursery rhyme on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/15/2024 11:15:00 PM

Dear Mala Congrats on your top win! Love the mention of Earl Grey, clock and the rest after work! Great imagination!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/16/2024 6:33:00 AM

Thank you, Krish! Writing for children is fun! And I find many other poets here enjoy writing nursery rhymes! including you!!!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/1/2024 8:30:00 AM

Nothing like curling up with a good book and sipping Earl Grey after a long, hard day. Very nice

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/1/2024 5:15:00 PM

Dear Tom, How can I thank you enough for reading three of my humble poems, and commenting too! Really appreciate your encouraging and kind words - I even picked up the brand-name "Earl Grey" from your comment, and added it to my poem! So thanks a lot! Warm wishes ~

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/26/2024 7:55:00 PM

This is a delightful poem, Malabika! Enjoyed it and good luck in the contest! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/28/2024 4:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Laura. Appreciate your encouraging comment.