Caryl Muzzey Poet Haiku

Long Cold Winter

**Haiku**

bitter wind blows stout
pelting icy snow crystals….
cold winter’s harsh thoughts

**Senryu**

treed primate postures
like Indian totem pole….
new politician

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Second Place Winner ~ "Natural and Beyond” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Freeman
Sept 22, 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2012 at 8:19 AM Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Caryl. Love, Carol

Constance La France August 30, 2011 at 3:22 PM Congratulations Caryl on your win in John's contest, beautiful poetry... I am sending you a soupmail~~

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2011 at 11:53 PM OUTSTANDING. And congrats. First time I saw these!!

Kash Poet August 29, 2011 at 9:45 PM Beautiful write.Congrats Caryl on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 29, 2011 at 5:53 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, Caryl

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2011 at 5:15 PM Congrats on your win..Very creative work from the picture..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Constance La France August 29, 2011 at 5:10 PM Congratutalions on your win in John's contest, awesome poem and thanks so much for your reading my poetry, I so appreciate that!~~

Carolyn Devonshire August 29, 2011 at 2:55 PM Love the haiku, but the senryu is incredible, Caryl! New politician, indeed. Folks in D.C. could learn from this "treed primate." Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

David Williams August 29, 2011 at 1:25 PM hey caryl congrats on your win David

Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2011 at 7:30 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson August 28, 2011 at 11:29 PM Clever and funny . Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 28, 2011 at 11:21 PM Congrats Caryl on your wonderful win with this poignant piece for the contest my friend..luv..

John Freeman August 28, 2011 at 9:14 PM Cool humor there in the last line Caryl. Congratulations on your worthy poem's second place. Agape, Moses

Wole Francis August 27, 2011 at 1:53 AM nice piece and best of luck.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 26, 2011 at 1:41 PM Lovely images to convey your lovely thoughts, good luck, Caryl