Long Clawed Devil Clown

We each within our self, deep down
Beneath the web of waking thoughts
Keep us a long clawed devil clown,
The image of our haunting fears and doubts.

He roared our fathers full of madness
Salting all the seven seas with tears
While crumbling empires fought to bless
The image of the prison of their fears

We shall rise anew, my good friends!
The mountain of doubt dividing us
Has reached the summit and now sends
Its peak self-piercing in a final thrust:

Though our fathers caged the devil clown,
Let's set him free and pass the pipe around.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Teagan Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Kind of creepy :) I like it!
Dalei Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Los, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
Laymen Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Thanks, good to be here.
A  Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 12:31 PM
hey Los, where's the pipe...JK
Laymen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 3:16 PM
. . . should be coming around again now soon.
A   Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Los Laymen,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 10:17 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Los. :)
Laymen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Thanks, Moon!
A  Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Los Laymen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Laymen Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Nice to be here. Thanks for the warm welcome.
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