Seren Roberts Poet Quatrain

Long and Winding Road For Beatlemania Contest

In my dreams I sing this song
That I am walking to your door
That I would be where I belong
Would be in your arms evermore

Reality is when I awake
Dried tears upon my face
Distraught making my body shake
Of you there is no trace

You died suddenly so very young
No time to live, no hopes no fun
We were just starting to play loves song
Your gone just like the setting sun

My life is different now, but still I try
To find you, you still have that hold
When alone I sit reminisce and cry
Walking that long winding road



03 March 2013

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Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2013 at 12:21 PM Seren.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 15, 2013 at 1:25 PM many congrats on your win poppet sorry it's a bit late xx Seren Roberts March 15, 2013 at 3:51 PM thx Mandy........Seren

Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 4:33 PM Congratulations on a great win Seren :-) Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 8:51 PM Awww thx Donna ..... Seren

Audrey Haick March 13, 2013 at 9:43 PM Congratulations on a super win, Seren! I love your poem and this is one of my favorite Beatles song. Always, Annalise Seren Roberts March 14, 2013 at 1:17 AM Thank you Annalise ......Seren

Joseph May March 13, 2013 at 6:04 PM congrats on your win Seren Seren Roberts March 13, 2013 at 6:07 PM oops I wrote that in the wrong place thanks Joseph. It is midnight and I am falling asleep....Seren Seren Roberts March 13, 2013 at 6:06 PM thank you David, I jusy scraped in lol....Seren Seren Roberts March 13, 2013 at 6:06 PM "just"

David Williams March 13, 2013 at 3:38 PM Seren congrats on your win, great journey...David Seren Roberts March 13, 2013 at 6:08 PM oops see above rofl

Carrie Richards March 13, 2013 at 2:36 PM Wow.......this breaks the heart, the road you took us down is so sad and melancholy. Would be wonderful lyrics for a sad sad song. well done, Seren! Seren Roberts March 13, 2013 at 6:09 PM Thank you Carrie...Seren

Heather Ober March 13, 2013 at 12:58 PM This is such a moving, heart-wrenching poem, Seren. You did a wonderful job using this song title. Congrats on your win in my contest :) Seren Roberts March 13, 2013 at 6:10 PM Thank you Heather

Cecilia Macfarlane March 5, 2013 at 7:33 PM A moving write that touches the heart, you have done this song title justice! Hugs Seren Roberts March 9, 2013 at 6:10 PM Thank you Cecilia ...Seren

David Williams March 3, 2013 at 6:05 AM Seren a great entree for the contest and I suspect a lot of truth in it....David Seren Roberts March 3, 2013 at 7:35 AM yes David as you know, its the truth ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2013 at 4:45 AM Hi sweetie this is tremendous and I can feel your pain luv, well done xx Seren Roberts March 3, 2013 at 7:35 AM Thanks Mandy, dont know why i keep opening the wound....Seren

Tim Ryerson March 3, 2013 at 4:08 AM Oh mercy me Seren...this is heartbreaking and beautiful...is it from a true-life experience? Have you seen the documentary 'Let it Be'?...A must see! They did an unannouced rooftop performance of 'Oh Daring'....priceless - Tim Seren Roberts March 3, 2013 at 7:37 AM Yes its true Tim my bf had a brain tumour, its been a hard road...Being here with friends have helped....Seren

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2013 at 11:24 PM seren, I love how you took that famous song title of the Beatles and made it your own. GREAT writing! Seren Roberts March 3, 2013 at 7:38 AM Thanks Andrea... I was hoping it worked ok....Seren

Russell Sivey March 2, 2013 at 8:48 PM This is such a beautifully sad write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this special poem this evening! What a lovely piece, you have delighted me to no end with this write, Great Work!! Seren Roberts March 13, 2013 at 6:11 PM Thank you very much Russell....Seren