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Long and Winding Road For Beatlemania Contest

In my dreams I sing this song That I am walking to your door That I would be where I belong Would be in your arms evermore Reality is when I awake Dried tears upon my face Distraught making my body shake Of you there is no trace You died suddenly so very young No time to live, no hopes no fun We were just starting to play loves song Your gone just like the setting sun My life is different now, but still I try To find you, you still have that hold When alone I sit reminisce and cry Walking that long winding road 03 March 2013

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Date: 3/16/2013 12:21:00 PM
Seren.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:25:00 PM
many congrats on your win poppet sorry it's a bit late xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/15/2013 3:51:00 PM
thx Mandy........Seren
Date: 3/14/2013 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win Seren :-)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 8:51:00 PM
Awww thx Donna ..... Seren
Date: 3/13/2013 9:43:00 PM
Congratulations on a super win, Seren! I love your poem and this is one of my favorite Beatles song. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/14/2013 1:17:00 AM
Thank you Annalise ......Seren
Date: 3/13/2013 6:04:00 PM
congrats on your win Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/13/2013 6:07:00 PM
oops I wrote that in the wrong place thanks Joseph. It is midnight and I am falling asleep....Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/13/2013 6:06:00 PM
thank you David, I jusy scraped in lol....Seren
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:06:00 PM
"just"
Date: 3/13/2013 3:38:00 PM
Seren congrats on your win, great journey...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/13/2013 6:08:00 PM
oops see above rofl
Date: 3/13/2013 2:36:00 PM
Wow.......this breaks the heart, the road you took us down is so sad and melancholy. Would be wonderful lyrics for a sad sad song. well done, Seren!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/13/2013 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Carrie...Seren
Date: 3/13/2013 12:58:00 PM
This is such a moving, heart-wrenching poem, Seren. You did a wonderful job using this song title. Congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Heather
Date: 3/5/2013 7:33:00 PM
A moving write that touches the heart, you have done this song title justice! Hugs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia ...Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 6:05:00 AM
Seren a great entree for the contest and I suspect a lot of truth in it....David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/3/2013 7:35:00 AM
yes David as you know, its the truth ...Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 4:45:00 AM
Hi sweetie this is tremendous and I can feel your pain luv, well done xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/3/2013 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Mandy, dont know why i keep opening the wound....Seren
Date: 3/3/2013 4:08:00 AM
Oh mercy me Seren...this is heartbreaking and beautiful...is it from a true-life experience? Have you seen the documentary 'Let it Be'?...A must see! They did an unannouced rooftop performance of 'Oh Daring'....priceless - Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/3/2013 7:37:00 AM
Yes its true Tim my bf had a brain tumour, its been a hard road...Being here with friends have helped....Seren
Date: 3/2/2013 11:24:00 PM
seren, I love how you took that famous song title of the Beatles and made it your own. GREAT writing!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/3/2013 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Andrea... I was hoping it worked ok....Seren
Date: 3/2/2013 8:48:00 PM
This is such a beautifully sad write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this special poem this evening! What a lovely piece, you have delighted me to no end with this write, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/13/2013 6:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Russell....Seren

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