Long Ago

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A haiku inspired by a picture.

Long Ago

the wintry wind left two leaves on a snowy bench – memory of love

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Silent One

Date: 1/9/2024 11:43:00 AM

Vivid imagery in your haiku.. nicely done..

A. Ormulyce
Date: 1/9/2024 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/9/2024 9:28:00 AM

I love pondering leaves and your poem is lovely!

A. Ormulyce
Date: 1/9/2024 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/9/2024 7:18:00 AM

You’ve written a very evocative and brilliant wintry haiku : love the picture you’ve used here too; one of your own from your photography collection? Its always good to read your work! Your poetic skills are always on point. I especially love “ memory of love” some seasons tend to do that more, give a sens of nostalgia! I felt that here

A. Ormulyce
Date: 1/9/2024 7:40:00 AM

Thank you so much. Your support means a lot. It's a picture I took at the beginning of December. Yes, I found these leaves evoking a nostalgic souvenir.