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Lonely Streets

Lonely Streets Lonely streets litter my mind. Dim yellow street lights casting eerie shadows shuffle of unseen feet demands attention “steady….wait for it” louder….closer… passing…..fading…. thunder pounds within the chest heartbeats response “fight or flight”. City streets acrid with the stench of too many too close, cluttered by the drifting, windblown debris of life’s indifference to living. Alleyways hiding the growl of predators, seeking a meal or more. Windows hiding secrets curtains veiling sins music drowning out hard tears. Lonely streets litter my mind. ©John G. Lawless 5/2/2017

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Date: 5/9/2017 1:41:00 PM
So many great lines in this one John, "curtains veiling sins", love that, super work...
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John Lawless
Date: 5/12/2017 6:43:00 PM
Thanks Charlie. Always appreciate your support
Date: 5/5/2017 3:32:00 PM
Lovely John i have never in my life read as attentioned a poem like this one, I thank you for sharing such charm.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/6/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thanks you Talin or such high praise. Appreciate your stopping to read and comment on the poem
Date: 5/5/2017 7:16:00 AM
Awesome John ~ the cold indifference, Love the last line ~ killer.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/6/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Phil, glad you enjoyed this walk down an old street

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