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Lonely Leaf In the Water

I watched it fall In spiralling flight This browned yellow leaf A saddened sight For not long ago It was alive and so green In a canopy of cover Above the stream I watched it meander Around rocks and through eddy's On the stream it continued Becoming more unsteady It's protective coating Now a shadow of it's past As the water moistens It's out on it's last It came to rest Between two rocks As the water cascaded To the bottom it dropped The end of it's life But it's journey goes on For nature will use This leaf that roamed .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/17/2021 6:01:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to the cycle of life ~ glad to find this lovely poem in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 3/15/2017 8:06:00 PM
The title caught my attention and I"m so glad I came in to read. Lovely poem!!
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Date: 10/13/2016 6:57:00 AM
Beautifully written ! It makes a lot of sense in all other lonely creatures!
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:53:00 PM
This is a nicely woven story :)
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James Fraser
Date: 7/25/2015 12:46:00 PM
Love seeing you here Debbie, I'm smiling, hugs and thank you, James :) :)
Date: 1/25/2015 4:35:00 AM
A sacred legacy you write of. Something so simple...the fact that you do not overlook this leaf and give it so much love and life is wonderful. I adore this verse. Thanks for sharing. Always,Laura
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James Fraser
Date: 1/27/2015 2:17:00 PM
Many thanks Laura for the wonderful comment, James :)
Date: 1/23/2015 9:01:00 AM
James, you have written a wonderful poem with this one my friend. I see that it won first place in a contest! Bravo!!!! Super 7 on this fine poem...
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James Fraser
Date: 1/23/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Robert, written by viewing an image of a leaf floating down a stream. Have a lovely weekend Robert, James :)
Date: 1/17/2015 12:18:00 PM
I loved reading about the journey of this leaf that I interpreted as a metaphor for human life as well. It is beautifully written James and belongs at the top. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/23/2015 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Connie, a simple little poem about a lovely leaf. Have a lovely weekend, James :)
Date: 1/16/2015 3:24:00 PM
James, I am in love with this poem! No kidding...this is the kind of poetry I could read over and over...to my faves, it goes! Have a blessed weekend and congrats on your first place win. Hugs, Rhonda
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James Fraser
Date: 1/23/2015 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda, I loved writing this little poem. Have a lovely weekend, hugs, James :)
Date: 1/16/2015 11:39:00 AM
Way to go !!! A great one to win first place..Congrats..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 1:40:00 PM
Mega thanks Sara, I loved writing this poem those years ago. Have a lovely weekend, James :)x
Date: 1/16/2015 8:52:00 AM
Jame, a beautiful descriptive journey. Congratulations on your win. Blessings eve
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Eve, much appreciated, blessings to you also, James :)x
Date: 1/16/2015 2:40:00 AM
Oh! How I love the way it was written. I can still imagine that lonely leaf cascading along the rocks. James, you deserved on the top list. Congrats!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Estela, it's a poem I so loved writing. Have a lovely weekend, James :)x
Date: 1/15/2015 10:14:00 PM
James, thank you for the sweet reply. I was happy to see you at my blog.. :) LINDA
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 1:19:00 PM
Glad to be there Linda, always a pleasure. Have a lovely weekend, James :)x
Date: 1/15/2015 8:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem James...big congrats
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 1:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly David, James :)
Date: 1/15/2015 8:11:00 PM
Excellent James and so worthy of first place! Congratulations on your win. So nice to see your name here.
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 1:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda for your always kind words, always appreciated, James :)
Date: 1/15/2015 6:31:00 AM
Oops one last thing Linda has a sharp eye she made the best choice putting this poem at the top of the list.
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, James :)
Date: 1/15/2015 6:28:00 AM
I can not believe James, sorry, I thought I would check to make sure but I was sure you were on my list of favorite poets. I was wrong. I just added you. I am so sorry!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Maurice, James :)
Date: 1/15/2015 6:25:00 AM
James, what an amazing write. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. This is a fav for me.
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Maurice, for all you have mentioned in said comments, very much appreciated, smiling widely here. Have a lovely weekend, James :)
Date: 1/15/2015 4:31:00 AM
the circle of life from the Lion kKng springs to mind - great write James many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 12:39:00 PM
Thank you kindly Jan - James :) xx
Date: 1/15/2015 3:20:00 AM
wow!!!! love this James.. a great picture in every stanza.. you can really draw emotions from this and reflections... a good symbolism!!!... olive eloisa :)! wowowowoowow!!!weeeeeee!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/23/2015 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Olive, I love this poem I've written. Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee - have a lovely weekend, James :)x
Date: 1/15/2015 12:51:00 AM
Congrats on this worthy win James...huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thank you kindly Kayod5, James :)
Date: 1/14/2015 11:56:00 PM
Wow thats an amazing write James! Congrats on top place win!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma. A simple write about a leaf - James :)
Date: 1/14/2015 10:34:00 PM
James, thanks for the Awesome entry. Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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James Fraser
Date: 1/15/2015 1:10:00 PM
I'm lost for words Linda, and smiling so widely. Thank for honoring my humble write about a leaf. Have a blessed day, James :)xx:)
Date: 11/28/2009 2:11:00 AM
This leaf represents our life somehow,our changes..touched me deep--Charma
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Date: 11/27/2009 10:09:00 AM
How absolutely beautiful, wondrous and lovely, you are an inspiration and an awesome storyteller, a person who sees the beauty in a fallen old leaf, that is poetry.
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Date: 11/27/2009 6:29:00 AM
I can see the scene as the leaf floats. It will decay and be of some use again. Keep your magical pen flowing. Sara
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