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Lonely Hearts Cafe

She rounded up the lonely ladies from the building Drove them for lunch at an outdoor terrasse Dropped them at the entrance then circled and circled Finally finding parking before rejoining the group As she finally dropped in her seat letting out a sigh of joy “What a most magnificent day!” The old miserable bitties piped up in unison... “not bad” AP: 3rd place 2020, Honorable Mention 2020 posted on May 29, 2018

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Date: 5/30/2018 9:59:00 PM
Ah! Those last two lines. Can just picture those 'old biddies.' Poignant portrait of life (as it is, or rather as it leaves lots of room for improvement). :) Gershon
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Date: 5/30/2018 10:06:00 PM
I don't think I will ever forget that scene as long as I live. I just shake my head. Thanks for your visit, Gershon.
Date: 5/30/2018 8:38:00 AM
Such a genuine portrait of human nature, Line well done xxoo Happy Wednesday
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Mike.

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