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Lonely Haiku

I miss you so much Sometimes I forget to trust I miss you that much

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2012 1:35:00 AM

hi! hi!... John.. your amazing... your haiku.. makes me want to tell you... I'm here".. but, we both know who you are longing for... Close your eyes.. and feel the mystery.. and there she will be... always.. your freind... hugs to you... good night... saved the best visit for last... pd

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 1/26/2012 9:19:00 AM

Nice haiku I appreciate a good one :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/26/2012 8:48:00 AM

Like your lonely haiku. You are never alone for HE walks beside you each and every day. love phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/25/2012 4:56:00 PM

I hear you John, hope you find that special someone to fill that empty space. Luv, Lizzie

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/25/2012 3:57:00 PM

lonely? is that why you've been misbehaving? looks like I'll have to keep you company and guide you back on to the straight and narrow again...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/25/2012 4:14:00 AM

john this is wonderful, heartfelt and profound. harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2012 7:19:00 PM

I understand the missing..Not in a mate but in my parents and other family members..It is like this one will think I will tell them or we will do that and then the reality sets in that no we won't..My husband and I dated 2 1/2 years before we were married..That is where the 52 years comes from..Things have not always been easy but we made it this far..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/23/2012 6:59:00 PM

very emotional write...heartfelt!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/23/2012 6:58:00 PM

trust in the savior....all else is fleeting