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Lonely Grave

He leans over the grave and kisses the frosty ground The last tears roll off his cheeks He looks East then West He is the only one there to say goodbye Surely this life mattered to someone But its just Date of birth, date of death On a faded grey flat stone embedded amongst the weeds Almost unnoticeable as i guess this life was before him. He wanted to scream. " is there no one who loved you," But there was no one to hear. He said a last prayer for this unwanted soul And in mid-prayer he felt himself floating upward Into the clouds, into the light And his last glimpse downward the revelation became finally clear It was his name on the headstone As heaven drew near.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/20/2015 5:26:00 PM
I look forward to ascending into the light if God will have my tattered soul!
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:28:00 PM
Oh, my - good write. I just read your collaboration with Poetry Destroyer and the final effort blew me away. It also led me here to read all you have ... CayCay
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Date: 8/29/2015 2:23:00 AM
Carl, this is deep, kind of creepy if you think about it. Standing in front of a headstone with my name. Not something, I'd want to say goodbye too..... Sad for the character in this poem, feeling unloved, even in death... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 8/28/2015 7:35:00 PM
Carl, W O N D E R FU L love this deep and dark write, stunning A7 and thanks for visiting my hushed pen poem, I worked on that for an entire day and put my heart and soul into it, so happy you liked it ~~
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Date: 8/28/2015 11:49:00 AM
OMG - this gav me chills... you're one of those who writes with such feeling...something that cannot be taught, but comes from within....
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Carl Fraser
Date: 10/11/2015 10:49:00 PM
Thanks for reading Genevieve, if you enjoy emotional poems I have one called A Life, HE Wept you should check out
Date: 8/26/2015 1:54:00 AM
Sad poem compounded by the sense of loss and loneliness. There is no better monument than the lives one has touched during one's life and the epitaph lives on in the hearts of friends even if absent. Kind regards, Ian
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