Lonely Grave

He leans over the grave and kisses the frosty ground
The last tears roll off his cheeks
  He looks East then West
He is the only one there to say goodbye
Surely this life mattered to someone
But its just Date of birth, date of death
On a faded grey flat stone embedded amongst the weeds
Almost unnoticeable as i guess this life was before him.
He wanted to scream. " is there no one who loved you,"
But there was no one to hear. 
He said a last prayer for this unwanted soul
And in mid-prayer  he felt himself floating upward
Into the clouds, into the light
And his last glimpse downward the revelation became finally clear
It was his name on the headstone
As heaven drew near.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 20, 2015 at 5:26 PM
I look forward to ascending into the light if God will have my tattered soul!
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September 4, 2015 at 7:28 PM
Oh, my - good write. I just read your collaboration with Poetry Destroyer and the final effort blew me away. It also led me here to read all you have ... CayCay
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August 29, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Carl, this is deep, kind of creepy if you think about it. Standing in front of a headstone with my name. Not something, I'd want to say goodbye too..... Sad for the character in this poem, feeling unloved, even in death... Always ~LINDA
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August 28, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Carl, W O N D E R FU L love this deep and dark write, stunning A7 and thanks for visiting my hushed pen poem, I worked on that for an entire day and put my heart and soul into it, so happy you liked it ~~
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August 28, 2015 at 11:49 AM
OMG - this gav me chills... you're one of those who writes with such feeling...something that cannot be taught, but comes from within....
Fraser Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Thanks for reading Genevieve, if you enjoy emotional poems I have one called A Life, HE Wept you should check out
Jones Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 1:54 AM
Sad poem compounded by the sense of loss and loneliness. There is no better monument than the lives one has touched during one's life and the epitaph lives on in the hearts of friends even if absent. Kind regards, Ian
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