M. L. Kiser Poet Etheree

Lonely Dunes Worlds Apart

 Tiny baubles of silica baking
mixed hues of brown and tan marble dots
juxtaposition meringue peaks
Desert dunes intersecting
wind-whipped terra-forma
sun-dried expression
of natures rant
desert dunes
smiling
bright.

Bleak
empty
crevasses
empty valleys
caressing the dark
broken hearts beat no more
ringed stories long forgotten
concatenated lifeless dreams
frozen in time they forever stand
empty vessels no longer utilized.


2-15-2022
E Forms- Etheree - Poetry Contest
Constance La France
Theme: Nature

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Sam Kauffman February 25, 2022 at 10:29 AM "Sun dried expression," "wind whipped terra forma" - just a couple examples of your very creative imagery - of showing not telling allowing our imaginations to understand your picture. So well done ML! This is so rich in the poetic expression of your theme! A fav for me. Congratulations and blessings!

Alexis Y. February 21, 2022 at 5:40 AM Hi M.L. You have penned such a well-written nature write. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a nice day-Alexis

Constance La France February 20, 2022 at 1:09 PM ML, congratulations on your Second Place win in my E Forms - Etheree contest with your wonderful poem, I loved it ~Constance

Susan Ashley June 5, 2019 at 8:56 PM Wow! I am enthralled with the deep, thoughtful beauty of your poem, M. L. 'concatenated lifeless dreams' - A stunning line amidst many here! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan M. L. Kiser June 5, 2019 at 10:08 PM Thanks so much.

Caren Krutsinger June 5, 2019 at 6:03 AM I am immediately seeing the badlands, wondering if I am anywhere close to the innerworkings of your marvelous poetic genius mind? M. L. Kiser June 5, 2019 at 10:09 PM The moon.