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Lonely Dunes Worlds Apart

Tiny baubles of silica baking mixed hues of brown and tan marble dots juxtaposition meringue peaks Desert dunes intersecting wind-whipped terra-forma sun-dried expression of natures rant desert dunes smiling bright. Bleak empty crevasses empty valleys caressing the dark broken hearts beat no more ringed stories long forgotten concatenated lifeless dreams frozen in time they forever stand empty vessels no longer utilized. 2-15-2022 E Forms- Etheree - Poetry Contest Constance La France Theme: Nature

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/25/2022 10:29:00 AM

"Sun dried expression," "wind whipped terra forma" - just a couple examples of your very creative imagery - of showing not telling allowing our imaginations to understand your picture. So well done ML! This is so rich in the poetic expression of your theme! A fav for me. Congratulations and blessings!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/21/2022 5:40:00 AM

Hi M.L. You have penned such a well-written nature write. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a nice day-Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 2/20/2022 1:09:00 PM

ML, congratulations on your Second Place win in my E Forms - Etheree contest with your wonderful poem, I loved it ~Constance

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/5/2019 8:56:00 PM

Wow! I am enthralled with the deep, thoughtful beauty of your poem, M. L. 'concatenated lifeless dreams' - A stunning line amidst many here! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 10:08:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/5/2019 6:03:00 AM

I am immediately seeing the badlands, wondering if I am anywhere close to the innerworkings of your marvelous poetic genius mind?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/5/2019 10:09:00 PM

The moon.