Lonely Day

Smile for me,
lonely girl,
smile and put your fears aside.
Sit with me
on this lonely old bench;
watch as the birds frolic
and play.
And cry on me, 
my dear love,
let your pain pour out anew-
this game of love has rolled to an end, 
and the only loser is you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 29, 2014 at 11:30 PM
Joseph,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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November 29, 2014 at 6:29 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Joseph - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 26, 2014 at 9:58 AM
Well written. Keep writing. If you click on a name or avatar, then it will take you to their works. If you then leave a comment... Then they will have a permanent link back to your works.
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November 24, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Very nice piece you've penned here, Joseph. Have a great day! ;) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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November 24, 2014 at 11:50 AM
Really enjoyed this piece, very well written Joseph. Best Wishes Kevin
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