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Lonely Corridor

lonely corridor--- sound of her high heels stranding me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/26/2012 12:59:00 PM
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From a happening in my childhood this speaks to me. Great representation of abandonment by a woman in your life or world. Catch ya later young fella. Huggs TLee
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/21/2012 9:23:00 AM
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Minute observation, loved it my friend always, bl
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/20/2012 9:45:00 PM
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wow, I didn't realize I had missed more of your writes. This is really nice, Kash. Let me see if the other haiku I have already seen or not.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/19/2012 6:31:00 PM
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run after her! Light & Love
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Kash Poet
Date: 4/20/2012 1:21:00 PM
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Running......running......running.......running.......
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/19/2012 7:33:00 AM
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The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Kash. Love, Carol
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/19/2012 7:17:00 AM
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Ow geeeeeee a sad haiku... but an outstanding one
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 4/19/2012 12:32:00 AM
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So who's the helpless one now? lol..Sweet haiku, Kash...
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/18/2012 5:01:00 PM
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you manage to fit so much into just a few words - very very nice!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/18/2012 2:30:00 PM
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wow....with such intensity. You are so good at this!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/18/2012 1:48:00 PM
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oh yeah.. cool, cool one, kashi.... you are amazing with short forms.. come over!
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