CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

Lonely Aint Working

When love rap-taps upon her door, it is merely sound she ignores.
No more time spent taking pictures or enjoying family dinners …
                   love aint working for her anymore
In her story, feeding on her fury, gone is life's glory, love purely blurs.
So ever still, my love rap-taps upon my Mother's newly framed door ...
                   love aint working for her anymore

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Kai Michael Neumann June 14, 2019 at 3:37 AM I like 'love rap-taps upon her door'. Congratulations on your win, Kai

Jennifer Proxenos June 14, 2019 at 1:16 AM Calling back with congrats dear CayCay - well done my friend. Hugs,

Darlene De Beaulieu November 26, 2018 at 7:49 PM Hello CayCay, I like this rhyme. Lonely is not working for me either. Have a nice evening my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong November 15, 2018 at 4:20 AM Your melancholy words reach deep. This poem contains a profound sadness wrapped in the kind of pain that can strangle. Wonderful writing CayCay! xxoo

Charlie Smith November 13, 2018 at 12:03 PM Reads like the start to a great Lyric, best wishes CayCay... CayCay Godwin November 14, 2018 at 10:02 PM Thank you, Charlie. Would you believe I'm tone deaf and can't write music? Lyrics, I could do, but the rest - just a dream, a good one. Thank you for visiting ... CayCay

Jennifer Proxenos November 13, 2018 at 5:56 AM Crossing fingers Cay Cay. I don't think you'll win, I know you'll win - you write beautifully, aptly and your poems are clever! xoxo Jennifer CayCay Godwin November 14, 2018 at 11:16 PM I didn't even place, but winning with your comments is dear to me, what more do I need? Thank you for such uplifting comments, you stir me and my pen. All the best ... CayCay

Constance La France November 12, 2018 at 4:20 PM CayCay, great write for the contest, best of luck ~ CayCay Godwin November 14, 2018 at 11:16 PM Thank you very much, Dear Heart! Appreciate you ... CayCay

Line Gauthier November 12, 2018 at 8:41 AM A delightful poem, CayCay. CayCay Godwin November 14, 2018 at 11:17 PM Thank you, Line. All the best ... CayCay