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ORIGINAL TITLE 'LENNY THE LIZARD'

Lonely Lenny lizard was as sad as sad can be
He lived in the rain forest in a leafy green tree

Prayed his dreams for a lady lizard would finally come true
But he was so quiet and shy what could poor Lenny do

Wandering around so sadly with his head held low
He had problems with his long tongue so he’d tied it in a bow

Lenny crawled slowly and found a craggy rock
Climbed up onto it and oh boy he got a shock

A stunning lady lizard was basking in the shade
Lenny blushed bashfully; should her privacy he invade

She flicked her tongue towards him and caught a tasty fly
Lenny was delighted that he'd caught this beauty’s eye

He went and sidled next to her, she did undo his bow
Now no longer tongue tied Lenny’s words began to flow

That day they found true love on that mossy green stone
Lenny is thrilled with his life and no longer lives alone


2nd June 2014

Submitted to Carol Eastmans contest
'Favourite Poem I've ever written'
Achieved No 1 position along with all the other poems entered :-)

Submitted to L poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France

This poem was inspired by just three little words from Darren Watson and my dream now is to turn it into an illustrated children's book.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/22/2021 9:39:00 AM
Jan, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful poem, excellent writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/17/2021 3:46:00 PM
Jan that’s absolutely wonderful, children will love it, adults too. Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Hugs, Belle :-) xx
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Date: 9/16/2021 4:14:00 PM
So utterly charming Jan! Hooray for Lenny! Three cheers for love! Kids would love this poem especially if they could illustrate it. Just made me smile with happiness for Lenny and his true love. Dreams do come true! Hugs :)
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Date: 10/17/2016 12:17:00 AM
Aww, this is just too sweet :) I love it!
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Date: 8/2/2014 12:04:00 PM
As some creative write. Loved reading it :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/2/2014 12:14:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Angie I think this is one of my favourite poems and one day i will pursue my dream of getting it into print:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 8/2/2014 12:05:00 PM
Awsome *
Date: 7/23/2014 5:17:00 PM
How are you?
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2014 5:19:00 PM
coping Ok - my dad is in hospice having respite - its tough but I'm ok... hope all is ok with you my friend. Hugs jan xxxx
Date: 7/23/2014 5:13:00 PM
Hi Jan, again :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/22/2014 9:27:00 AM
All of love around I was lugging Along with all my kissing and hugging Now I always feel so very comfortable Knowing of all I am the most loveable. See if you can top that one. How do you happen to find my poems anyway?
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Date: 7/22/2014 9:31:00 AM
Love yr poems James that's why I read and comment on them:-) hugs jan x
Date: 7/22/2014 8:55:00 AM
Lenny was the one who was leaping While the rest all were creeping Very kind and also considerate Even if he happened to be illiterate.
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:58:00 AM
Thanks for the comment James Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2014 4:00:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks for the reply on my comment...Linda
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Date: 7/18/2014 4:06:00 PM
:-) xxx
Date: 7/18/2014 2:45:00 PM
Jan,, Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/18/2014 8:55:00 AM
Yes indeed Jan, I can see this as a children's book or even a series of books...A perfect little tale for the kiddies! Congrats - Tim
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Date: 7/18/2014 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Tim I hope one day my dream will come true:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/17/2014 9:36:00 AM
Way to go Jan! Congratulations.
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Date: 7/18/2014 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Richard:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 7/16/2014 8:01:00 PM
I still love this! and glad glad glad it was number 1. you rock my lady!
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Date: 7/16/2014 11:08:00 PM
My favourite poem I've written Casarah:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/16/2014 7:31:00 PM
Jan, do that book. the idea of a tongue tied lizard is ingenious.
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Date: 7/16/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thanks John when life is less hectic - my father is very ill - then I will look into it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/16/2014 1:15:00 PM
Really cute , Jan. Kids would love it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/16/2014 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Joyce one day i will get round to trying to get it published. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/16/2014 11:42:00 AM
my sweet JAn!! how you.. :D! so sweet this won!! and thanks for sharing this to us for free.. :D!! hugs and hugs God bless you!! CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 7/16/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Olive:-) Hugs janxxxx
Date: 7/16/2014 4:45:00 AM
ohh, and they lived happily together... awesome story,jan.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:48:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Nette:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/16/2014 1:07:00 AM
Wonderful write Jan n so is the top win! Congrats my dear friend!
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:13:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma for the lovely comment. This is probably my personal favourite of my poems. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/15/2014 7:14:00 PM
Tongue in a knot, literally! Good one! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2014 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Roy. I love this poem its probably my favourite I've ever written. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/15/2014 1:33:00 PM
Another wonderful win with this one Jan...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/15/2014 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Tim. It is one of my favourite poems probably because it is so different from my normal writes. Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxx
Date: 7/15/2014 11:13:00 AM
Your poem is definitely a worthy addition for an illustrated Children's Story. Go make it a reality... And thank you for entering my contest.
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Date: 7/15/2014 1:44:00 PM
When my life is somewhat calmer Carol I will pursue my dream! Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/14/2014 10:43:00 PM
I'm a little late Jan, however , I'm passing by to say hi, and thank you for the reply, you left on the comment I left below... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 7/15/2014 1:07:00 AM
Always lovely to see you Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/26/2014 12:51:00 PM
Aww this is well expressed thought....loved your feelings and warm congratulation!
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Date: 6/26/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment Litan. Hugs jan xxx
Date: 6/25/2014 7:21:00 AM
:)oh why not Jan.. :D kindly tell me the title of Darren Watson's poem which got you inspired.. :D? I would love to see this in print.. :) kudos for the wins!!! love lots, olive eloisa wanting to hug you tight.. :D
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Date: 6/25/2014 7:30:00 AM
It wasn't from a poem Olive it was simply three words in a soup mail. I am inspired by all of Darren's writes both on his own and in our collaboration as Jadazzle United and am truly blessed to have him in my life as a wonderful friend. Hugs Jan xx
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