Lonely

Little and slowly life ebbs away
Own self for company stayed another day.
Never a smile, never a visit,
Everyone too busy, peoples past existence.
Lonely is quiet, lonely doesn't speak,
Yearn for life connection my loneliness does seek.


"L" Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest

Sponsor  Constance La France 

Written   15.09.21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Words to remember Emilia. Loneliness is not just a season but can define a life. Congratulations on your win! All the best.
James Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Thank you so much Sam, take care, Emilia : )
La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Emilia, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your wonderful poem, splendid writing _Constance
James Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Thank you so much Constance. Emilia : )
Gondolf Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 10:40 AM
WE will never be alone as long as we have our friends here at PS. Nicely written my friend. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, John
James Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Thank you so much John and for your GL wishes. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs, Emilia : )
Hamill Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Hi Emilia, it must be the worst feeling in the world being lonely.good luck in comp.take care.simon.:):)
James Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Hi Simon and thank you. I think we all can feel a bit lonely at some point in our lives but for some it is much worse and usually long term. Emilia : )
Romios Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 2:56 AM
Many people are lonely, not just the elderly! It’s a huge problem. You described it so well and accurately.We Think the internet is our best friend or lover? Huge mistake. We are only letters om a screen. People need people. They need to see mouths talks and socialize, perfect topic for these times Best wishes..Panagiota
James Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 4:30 AM
Spot on Pangie and thank you. I agree with you on all what you said. The world seems to hide away from itself now. Take care. Emilia :)
Summers Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Very good poem, it reminds me of some of the people in nursing homes I’ve seen. John
James Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Thank you John.It seems the more crowded the world becomes the more people feel lonely. Emilia : )
Cunningham Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 7:56 AM
You often hear of the elderly people living lonely lives with only the TV for company, a sad place to be. Good luck Emilia, hope week is going well. Tom
James Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Yes and my heart goes out to them all and with now having to pay for their TV licence some may not even have that now. Week going well thank you (ask me again after I have drank the wine) lol. Emilia : )
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