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Loneliness Lives Next Door

We learned about lonely people At a tender impressionable age Our neighbour was sixty or so A widower leading a quiet life Grand-father figure to us kids We’d drop by visit the odd afternoon It was dark and lacked life or joy His little house felt smoky and cloistered He taught us how to play cribbage First sips of beer, cigarettes, silver coins He seemed so painfully lonely In his little house smoky and cloistered Posted on December 26, 2017

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Date: 12/27/2017 1:37:00 PM
I was taken by the great title, Line and then your words really brought it to life, Great job XXOO
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Date: 12/28/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Mike. Greatly appreciated.
Date: 12/27/2017 7:00:00 AM
You captured the lonely man perfectly, Line--I can see the kids playing with the man in his dark, smoky house.
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Date: 12/28/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Vijay. Much appreciated.

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