Loneliness Hotel

The loneliness sets in; 
The depression has too
I can't seem to focus
My mind in this catch twenty-two. 

The rolling coaster I'm on:
The ups, downs, the emotions
I can't see the end quick enough
To halt pollution in my commotion.

It's been five months now: 
I'm so exhausted inside out
I've tried getting my mind off things
But it seems not to be working out.

Picking up my ole' hobbies again, I do.  
My focus will not focus on just one or two
You see, two or three, four is more the count I play.

When I am drawing, I'm typically set;
I have no remorse that I'd regret
I'll not take it slow on pain, bet.

I seek more profound ways to overlook;
But it seems it won't work; this sad book
So much exhaustion, I feel inside and out
Hanging his head down long to pout.

Find a way around obstacles: 
Seem's to fix a simple solution
Resolute to its highest form
Whatever you're working on, a solution.

Get past the loneliness, feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/12/2022 4:01:00 PM
Hello William Darnell Sr. Yes you must find a way out of the obstacle. Do not give up. Keep on trying. Get wll soon. I will pray for you. Blessing
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 4/16/2022 6:15:00 AM
God Bless you this Easter, Darlene!
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William Darnell Sr
Date: 4/16/2022 6:13:00 AM
Hello, Darlene! I always find my way back, me fair Lady. Happy Easter, Darlene! Best of Wishes, William
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