Loneliness Echoes Till Sunset

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"Has solitude ever led your steps down a forest path . . . "
                                     Quote by_Constance La France

As loneliness echoes till sunset,
From restless dreams beneath forest path,
Spent; to wake in a sheen of sweat.

Past epoch made a new reset,
Awaking longing grief footpath,
As loneliness echoes till sunset.

Foliage hues fade and all forget,
With each step, deep amber earth hath
Spent; to wake in a sheen of sweat.

Wands of pine sway to the taste of wet
Chilly nights soulful aftermath
As loneliness echoes till sunset.

Nature distant calls once obscure, met,
Bleakness fades with unprovoked wrath,
Spent; to wake in a sheen of sweat.

Nostalgia's dapple scent is let
Along the river flow towpath,
As loneliness echoes till sunset
Spent; to wake in a sheen of sweat.


11/15/2022

2.  Quote #2 - Inspiration with a theme of - Nature
Writing Challenge - ''V'' Forms Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/1/2022 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve!
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Date: 11/30/2022 5:55:00 AM
Creative winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2022 9:35:00 AM
Eve, a beautiful Villanelle poem, I love it and the image. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge V Forms inspired by my quote. Well done, blessings !
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Date: 11/23/2022 8:31:00 PM
"Nostalgia's dapple scent is let Along the river flow towpath" - Beautiful.
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Date: 11/23/2022 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and for this outstanding villanelle of yours my dear friend Eve! Thanks for sharing. A Very Happy Thanksgiving Day my dear friend. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 11/23/2022 12:35:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Eve ~ nature's dapple scent is let ~ Congratulations!
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Date: 11/21/2022 4:33:00 PM
A beautiful contest entry, Eve. Good luck in the contest. Blessings
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Date: 11/21/2022 12:19:00 AM
Excellent, Eve. Sorry for the abandonment lately but I am really down. Hugs.
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Date: 11/20/2022 10:34:00 PM
Wow, beautiful Eve <3
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Date: 11/20/2022 4:17:00 PM
gorgeous imagery, Eve
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Date: 11/20/2022 6:32:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Eve - Perfect for Constance's contest... good luck :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs
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Date: 11/17/2022 10:49:00 AM
I have never tried this form. But, I know you did well on this Best wishes Pangie
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Date: 11/16/2022 6:22:00 PM
The imagery of your poem is so beautiful, Eve.. "Wands of pine sway" - just amazing! A mesmerizing piece. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/16/2022 7:43:00 AM
Excellently written, Eve. Your metaphoric images are so beautifully portrayed.
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Date: 11/16/2022 6:10:00 AM
Beautifully crafted images, Eve. Excellent write.
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Date: 11/15/2022 11:57:00 PM
Wonderful villanelle. Hugs.
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Date: 11/15/2022 7:21:00 PM
This is soulful writing, Eve:)
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Date: 11/15/2022 6:28:00 PM
As loneliness echoes in the sunset, the praying soul waits for sunrise, my dear, lovely poem gl in the contest
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