Loneliness

My life is an ocean of tears and i cant think

Big fears all around me and im about to sink.

Im losing everything including my light.

All i see is intensive darkness of a cold night.

And none of my friends are in sight.

All i feel is pure loneliness which no one can fight.

My shaking hands showing me that im not dead.

But im caught in the emptiness of my head.

THERES NOTHING I GOT (X6)

Why am I in so much pain?

Plus always stayin in heavy rain.

Why do i scream SOS?

When nobody is hear in order to relief me of my pain and stress.

The void is killing me slowly until my weep.

Gets me to fall into ETERNAL SLEEP.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/14/2011 12:26:00 PM
Sod means so out of dimension but sos means some one save me from the distress of the hell that I would soon have to face if I don't let my fears get a hold of me I always feel the loneliness but I try not to let it get to me
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Date: 3/14/2011 12:23:00 PM
So enjoyed reading this poem and welcome to poetrysoup and I look forward to reading more of your poetry and I loved how u said why do I scream SOS sometimes I scream sod but my sos helps me write poetry.
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Date: 3/2/2011 5:17:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mckinley. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:48:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too...
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