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Loneliness - a Country Song

I wonder what I am going to do. I wonder where U are. & I wonder why the cocktails, are no longer free at the bar. I wonder why my ankles swell, And I wonder if U know. I wonder if the sugar’s sweet, and if ice really tastes like snow. If you think my sugar’s sweet, And ice really tastes like snow, Then I wonder if when you remember me - you’ll call home and let me know. It would be better for both of us, If you’d call home and let me know. Perhaps then, I’d know where to go. I wonder if U love me, I wonder if you’re true. I wonder if the yard guy we hired is really out with the flu. I wonder what happened to last night, I wonder why I didn’t know. & I wonder if you will spit in my hand, And try to sell it as snow. If you believe you will spit in my hand, And try to sell it as snow, Then I ask if when you remember me you will help me, by letting me go. It would be the best thing for the both of us, if you would let me go. I’m alone when I’m with you, alone when I’m not I swear babe, I just don’t know. I wonder why I give a damn, Because clearly you do not. I wonder when I’ll get a life, and stop wanting the one that you’ve got. Wonder if I will grow some cajones, I wonder where mine are, And I wonder if it’s after five cause then cocktails - are free at the bar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2013 3:21:00 PM
about the ballad: now you have me wondering if ice really taste like snow... very cold i bet... I do not know about meeting this one in a bar... he he he... makes me want to drink and forget.... good one...PD
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Date: 1/22/2013 3:19:00 PM
oooo... Hi Mari,,, I like the name Mari.. is it short for Maria... I'm only asking cuz, I have a daughter name Maria" we all call her "MARI" with out the a for fun and short... Linda
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Date: 1/14/2013 8:12:00 PM
Hahahahaha....Oh that is a sweet write. :o) The whole "Cocktails are free at the bar" thing was funny! Though if your with a guy like that,I think it's time to say goodbye....
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Mari Banks
Date: 1/22/2013 12:19:00 PM
LOL!! Thanks Dan! Fortunately I left him long ago. The stupidity of youth and all . . .

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