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Lone Wolf

I am the loner, the rebel never the leader, I go my own way. Never trying to run with the pack, but ahead of them. I never go where they go, or do what they do. Surviving amongst the solitude of dense forests and misty fogs. Living for the moonlit midnight hours. Running wild and free with the wind in my hair and the moon reflecting in my golden eyes. My kind is close to extinction. Only a few others remain who are trustworthy, only to them do I remain loyal. I am unforgiving to those who would dare to cross my path. I am never afraid to speak out into darkness. My wail fills the night air, a lone cry not of sadness, or loneliness, but of freedom, to go my own way and be a loner. For Just That Archaic Poet's contest - "Personify Any Animal Of Your Choosing"

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Date: 10/22/2014 2:50:00 PM
reading this again kelly beautifully penned
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/27/2014 10:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Liam. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, once again!
Date: 10/2/2014 11:59:00 PM
You chose a very worthy animal to portray. Congrats i the contest. this was very nicely done.
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Date: 10/1/2014 4:55:00 AM
Nice character-sketch of wonderful animal, kelly, congrats
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/5/2014 6:19:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it very much, Dr. Ram.
Date: 10/1/2014 3:24:00 AM
Wolfs are an amazing animal. When I was studying drama one of the actresses had two wolves as pets. I met them several times they were so beautiful and hers really large. Congratulations on your win along with a few others this one of my favorites.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/5/2014 6:13:00 PM
Yes, they are amazing, Maurice. Wolves are one of my favorite animals. They seem to be so mysterious and rebellious.... Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. It means a lot that you thought my poem was so enjoyable!
Date: 9/30/2014 3:43:00 PM
wonderful personification Kelly many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/4/2014 1:18:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind congrats. I really appreciate it, Jan! Hugs :)
Date: 8/2/2014 11:36:00 PM
The lone wolf doesn't run with the pack because he is faster and stronger then them. If he runs with them, he would be held back, and won't be free. This poem is very introspective. Lovely work Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/7/2014 12:13:00 AM
That is so true. Sometimes, we just have to break away from the pack and go our own way.... Thank you for the kind comments, Rohan. I appreciate it so much!
Date: 1/28/2014 3:42:00 PM
Kelly, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifing Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/29/2014 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, SKAT. I very much appreciate your support. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. I wish that I could read every poem that makes it onto the winner's list. I just don't have the time, but I get through as many as I can! :)
Date: 1/5/2014 11:15:00 AM
I felt it. Very good! Congratulations!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/8/2014 4:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Roy! I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/5/2014 9:25:00 AM
love it Kelly congrats Shadow x smile hug
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/8/2014 4:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Shadow! I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 1/5/2014 12:30:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/8/2014 3:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 1/4/2014 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest, SP! :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/8/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thank you very much for the honor, BP! :)
Date: 1/3/2014 2:55:00 PM
Kelly, Sometimes we run with the pack sometimes alone. I wrote about this in Swimming Upstream. Being the odd one out can be a lonely way to live. Remember though, the wolf is an amazing and resourceful animal.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/7/2014 11:18:00 PM
It sure can be a lonely way to live, Allan. But, as you said, wolves are very resourceful animals, and they can usually find some comfort in their solitude. Thank you very much for the great comments, Allan. I really appreciate it!
Date: 1/1/2014 9:42:00 AM
Brilliant Kelly! Know that you're not alone, for your words echo my life succinctly. Big hugs.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/3/2014 3:10:00 PM
I am glad that you find my poem to be relatable, Mustapha. Sometimes, being alone is not always a bad thing. I enjoy the solitude of being alone, because it just gives me time to relax. Thank you for the wonderful comments. Big hugs to you! :)
Date: 12/31/2013 6:19:00 PM
Dear friend you don't have to cry, i have excepted and have embraced that little child within me, it has helped me deal with all the pain inside myself to write, i've learned how to use this pain as a strength not as a weakness and it's helped me as a person to over come alot of my painful past. i'm here if you need a person to talk to any time. cheri
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 8:25:00 PM
I really felt your poem on an emotional level, because it brought to mind thoughts of my own childhood. Thank you, Cheri. It is always nice to have good friends around when you need to talk. :)
Date: 12/31/2013 5:42:00 PM
Awesome personification with vivid imagery of the lone wolf throughout. Well done
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 6:27:00 PM
Thank you very, very much, Karen. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 12/31/2013 9:19:00 AM
you are a wondrous poet alone or not...love this amazing rendering of yours...happy new years...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Harry. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/30/2013 8:03:00 PM
IOL I have not finished it yet but as soon as i'm done I'll post it my friend promise, cheri
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Date: 12/29/2013 7:18:00 PM
excellently penned totally relate like watching in the shadows working everything out happyy new year
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 5:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Liam. Happy New Year, my friend!
Date: 12/29/2013 12:06:00 AM
wow, I love how you did yours. Wonderful job!!! I dated a guy in college who was native american. He name was John Lone Wolf!! I think if I had been Indian, maybe they'd have called me Porpoise who loves the sun
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 5:06:00 PM
lol!...Thank you so much, Andrea!
Date: 12/28/2013 11:07:00 PM
Kelly This is a great tale of your personality and traits. I enjoyed reading it and learning more about you. You gave the reader an insight into your soul and spirit. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my About My Poems write. Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2013 10:30:00 PM
To the lone wolf creator loved this on levels you may understand great write my friend beautifully written and done. and thank you for your storytelling also, and for your wonderful comment on my ivory rose. cheri
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/30/2013 5:48:00 PM
I do understand how you could enjoy this deeply and would be able to relate. Thank you so much for understanding, Cheri, and for the wonderful comments, as well!
Date: 12/28/2013 10:32:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..The leader of the pack is a unique animal..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2013 10:54:00 PM
GREAT WRITE HERE OF A LONER, AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY RECENT WORK CHERI
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/28/2013 9:36:00 PM
Thank you once again, my friend! I am glad that you enjoyed this poem. And, you are welcome, I always enjoy reading your work, Cheri!
Date: 12/27/2013 10:13:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Awesome write..Happy Holidays! Ken
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/28/2013 10:41:00 PM
Hi Ken, thank you so much for your great comments. I hope you had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!

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