Lone Tree

In the field’s center, Rests a life in solitude; Sequestered beauty.

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Sandra Hudson

Date: 4/17/2009 3:05:00 PM

Hi Raul...I like the way you ink!-AA

Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 10:05:00 AM

Your titles fit so well with the context. You do great masterful work.

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:11:00 AM

You're on fire with your haiku's. DN

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2009 9:59:00 AM

I love the serenity in the scene you paint, Raul! Beautiful Haiku!

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/25/2009 2:20:00 AM

Lovely ending line.........Danielle

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 1:31:00 AM

Pleasant imagery.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:19:00 PM

Sequestered beauty it is to see a tree in the middle of a field. Love E.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 10:49:00 PM

Nice representation of loneliness. Tyler

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/23/2009 6:51:00 PM

Terrific haiku..I can picture it. BG

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/23/2009 3:23:00 PM

I can feel the solitude on this haiku, nice job

Jim Wilson

Date: 3/23/2009 3:10:00 PM

I really like this; the idea of a tree as a kind of hermit is one I've never run across. Thanks.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/23/2009 2:51:00 PM

I would love to be by that tree, right now. Your poetry is a gift. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/23/2009 1:37:00 PM

Love this...can put this picture in my mind's eye, one lone tree standing in the sun. ~ nice work! ~Carrie

James Christian

Date: 3/23/2009 1:16:00 PM

wow this is breathtaking, such a beautiful image you have painted here in so few words. Truly wonderful. Blessings ~JAMES~ GOD BLESS

Sammy Shaq

Date: 3/23/2009 1:16:00 PM

Beautiful, I can picture a soccer field where I am in the center, the seats all empty, the grass greener than ever. The sky sprinkled with stars and the beauty shines so bright. Beautiful I must say again. Sami

Michaela Payne

Date: 3/23/2009 1:14:00 PM

wow this is breathtaking, such a beautiful image you have painted here in so few words. Truly wonderful. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Date: 3/23/2009 12:44:00 PM

Wow! What a wonderful and peaceful thought. Blessings to you for sharing this one with us. Karen