Lone Tree

In the field’s center,
Rests a life in solitude;
Sequestered beauty.

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Sandra Hudson

April 17, 2009 at 3:05 PM

Hi Raul...I like the way you ink!-AA

Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:05 AM

Your titles fit so well with the context. You do great masterful work.

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:11 AM

You're on fire with your haiku's. DN

Carolyn Devonshire

March 25, 2009 at 9:59 AM

I love the serenity in the scene you paint, Raul! Beautiful Haiku!

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:20 AM

Lovely ending line.........Danielle

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 1:31 AM

Pleasant imagery.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:19 PM

Sequestered beauty it is to see a tree in the middle of a field. Love E.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 10:49 PM

Nice representation of loneliness. Tyler

Barbara Gorelick

March 23, 2009 at 6:51 PM

Terrific haiku..I can picture it. BG

Abe Lopez

March 23, 2009 at 3:23 PM

I can feel the solitude on this haiku, nice job

Jim Wilson

March 23, 2009 at 3:10 PM

I really like this; the idea of a tree as a kind of hermit is one I've never run across. Thanks.

Sharon Winter

March 23, 2009 at 2:51 PM

I would love to be by that tree, right now. Your poetry is a gift. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

March 23, 2009 at 1:37 PM

Love this...can put this picture in my mind's eye, one lone tree standing in the sun. ~ nice work! ~Carrie

Sami Al-Khalili

March 23, 2009 at 1:16 PM

Beautiful, I can picture a soccer field where I am in the center, the seats all empty, the grass greener than ever. The sky sprinkled with stars and the beauty shines so bright. Beautiful I must say again. Sami