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LONE STAR



lone star
glittering in winter sky
cold



posted on October 14, 2018

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Date: 10/16/2018 10:41:00 AM
Brrrrr! Nicely done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 12:00:00 PM
Thanks, Jean, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/15/2018 3:45:00 PM
cold as metaphor for lonely always works well ,Line. Wish I could see more of your poetry. Just no time these days.
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Date: 10/15/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.
Date: 10/15/2018 10:44:00 AM
I just got a chill...great image.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Date: 10/15/2018 9:18:00 AM
So beautiful, one to ponder! Is the Winter sky cold or the star. Is the lone star a person. The star seems to be beautiful. Not questions to answer...just some that your lovely ku stirs! A fave!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for playing along, Kim. This is exactly what the intent of this short form is - a play between the writer and the reader. Line xx