Lone Star

lone star glittering in the distance ~ winter sky AP: 3rd place 2023 Posted on October 14, 2018

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Jean Bush

Date: 10/16/2018 10:41:00 AM

Brrrrr! Nicely done.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 12:00:00 PM

Thanks, Jean, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2018 3:45:00 PM

cold as metaphor for lonely always works well ,Line. Wish I could see more of your poetry. Just no time these days.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/15/2018 10:44:00 AM

I just got a chill...great image.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/15/2018 9:18:00 AM

So beautiful, one to ponder! Is the Winter sky cold or the star. Is the lone star a person. The star seems to be beautiful. Not questions to answer...just some that your lovely ku stirs! A fave!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 9:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for playing along, Kim. This is exactly what the intent of this short form is - a play between the writer and the reader. Line xx