Lone Fish

I enjoyed this write, love the last two lines, Very nicely done

You have written a discerning rhyme based on shrewd judgement. An observational work on the dilemma one sometimes encounters in the decision making process. In response to your extraordinarily kind reflections on Wild And Free I did indeed invest a large amount of time on it

What a creative write. I really enjoyed it. Have a great day................

An intriguing thought, Hilda. Sometimes there's nothing wrong, the fish just didn't fit in. Probably a poet. LOL, I enjoyed reading your poetry today, my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry! Have a pleasant weekend! Bill

I guess there are 'blowfish,' and also 'Slowfish.' ~ One-fish, two-fish, ... Dr. Seuss

An interesting and thought provoking, outstanding poem! Perhaps the lone fish 'swam' to the beat of a different drummer. I hope your week is nice. :)

Hilda, here is a really fundamental and nice assessment of one of the living species! The final Verse of the poem is just brilliant!

Such a clever, fun write. Sounds like that fish was just a square.

Absolutely! The world needs rules, boundaries, and children above all need guidance. Excellent poem!

A charming poem Hilda to liken a fish that lags a little behind was a perfect likeness for a Soccer Ref. I really like this poem.

What a delightful poem Hilda and so well written especially that last line. Poor little fish - you observed well and captured his unfortunate position. A thought provoking read. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you. :):)

A simple ,lovely observation of one of life's creatures Hilda! Great poem especially that last line! Debx

You are such a deep observer and this is so heartfelt and soulful. Made me think deep too. Especially the last line. I think so too. Perhaps his sense of circle had never been defined. Pleasure always reading you