Lone, But Not Lonely

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Joan Marlowe was eight years old, and loved the smiling, happy people; As green pines love chattering redbirds, when an orange sun is gleeful. And yet, when some found they were too busy, Joan petulantly pouted, Like the creeping golden sunshine, dark blue-gray skies, once doubted. Little Joan was outgoing and fun, the little girl that everyone wanted; And often full of joyous smiles, like the rose, to which heart responded. Fine feathered, fan-tailed cuckoos, passed sweet violet time, so slowly; When Joan and best friends played hopscotch, 'til plum sun sunk lowly. And Joan truly loved jumping games, such as leap frog, or jump rope; Like the emergence of emerald leap year, when hazy time must cope. Fiery stars abided, firmly fixed, like blithe, fixed smiles of family, calling; When fun was permanently a household word, like rainbows enthralling. Joan lived in the house of lineage, and the ancestors peered from walls; And musical laughter was ever present, inside the rose perfumed halls. Semiconscious noon sparkled saffron, down their spacious street of sun; As sultry, yellow summer, startled shadow, 'ere the idle hour was done. Nameless, nectarous blooms brought smiles, to the neighbors, coming; In wild days of not much renown, when goggle-eyed frogs were jumping. Cheeky clover was turning up everywhere, arrayed in contrasting colors; When whimsical rose felt sapphire blue, her rare hue of golden summers. And quirky 'Queen Anne's Lace,' undulated in elegance and cool grace; As seared sun drops swooned in place, amid lily laughter, hard to trace. Joan's favorite Aunt, Alice, was coming to visit. Aunty was loads of fun! She would bring treats and tell late stories, like an aurora borealis vision. But, Alice found she could not come, for she had to tend to a sick friend; Like a hued whirlwind of confusion, in swirling leaves, at summer's end. Crushed, Joan sunk into a discontented pout, like blooms, weeping rain. Still so very young, Joan had not yet learned, to feel for another's pain. When Mother scolded, saying, 'What if you were sick?' Joan understood; And was ashamed of her bad behavior, like variable shades of childhood. Joan still loves throngs of colorful people, but now loves her own society, Like the lusty song of lone blackbird, in the garden of varicolored variety. 'Here am I, little jumping Joan, When nobody’s with me, I’m always alone.'

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Date: 11/19/2024 10:48:00 PM
As 'Queen Anne's Lace was undulating, I was tremulating. Wonderful piece, Evelyn. Kudos, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/20/2024 5:30:00 PM
Thank so for your kind remarks, so very titillating. :D
Date: 10/27/2024 11:41:00 PM
Ah the innocence of a child Evelyn - and their oblivion to anything sad as they are always so exuberant. You have the amazing ability of blending contrasting colours and nature into your poems. Loved it - Hugs Maria
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/28/2024 7:12:00 PM
Thank you for the great pleasure of your warm remarks and fine compliments, Maria. Hugs and blessings.
Date: 10/27/2024 11:15:00 AM
A very sweet story. Joan will have a life filled with friends
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/27/2024 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for the smiles, dear Andrea. :)
Date: 10/27/2024 9:27:00 AM
You are so capable of recounting a tale. Great imagination. The ending nursery rhyme is perfect.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/27/2024 4:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for your gracious words. Blessings, my friend. :)
Date: 10/26/2024 7:35:00 PM
You definately found your niche! These playful nursery rhymes go well with your telling couplets! Likewise a year or so ago my husband got knocked out. He was refereeing wrestling. My grandson had to go home and was so upset not quite sympathetic with his Grandpa’s plight. After he calmed down he started to understand. Great write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2024 4:37:00 PM
It happened a year or so ago. Thankfully he is fine. He was distracted and two heavyweights fell on top of him.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/27/2024 4:46:00 PM
Wow, I hope your husband's okay now! Some things are so much harder for a child's mind to grasp. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of your appreciation. Hugs :)
Date: 10/26/2024 2:30:00 AM
Dear evelyn, i feel for this innocent and young character that youv described and written about using beautiful imagery woven with stunning alliterations! So touching! Made me feel sorry for him too that he only finds happiness through his special aunt , sigh! And the ending is brilliant too. You are an amazing storyteller! And you always leave me in awe of how artistically you write! Pleasure reading. a fave this is:sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/26/2024 6:55:00 PM
Thank you for lovely thoughts, dear friend. Your words are always heartwarming and smile inducing. Your compliments and kind fave are very gratifying. Blessings.
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