London Dawn

I strolled around old London town
And walked to Maiden Lane;*
I closed my eyes, imagined them,
Despite the pouring rain.

I swear I heard a roaring crowd,
But no one could I see,
And then I heard a single voice:
‘To be or not to be…’

The play had ended with the dawn,
And shadows took a bow;
I smiled at him, and he at me;
I didn’t ponder how.

I stood alone, the silence loud;
And knew I’d been there, in the crowd.

*now Park Street
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 24, 2012 at 1:40 AM
love it, love London too! and i read Shakespeare too when i have the time. well-penned poem jack
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January 19, 2012 at 8:27 PM
hey awesome poem Jack. So well done and I see congrats are in order and its no wonder with this brilliant poetic muse..
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January 19, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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January 18, 2012 at 10:27 PM
Wow Jack. What a picture you drew. Congratulations
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January 18, 2012 at 8:14 PM
By imaging the past brought into present beautifully pictured. Enjoyed Park Street of London town from India, loved it, bl
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January 17, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Lovely description of the rain at dawn on Maiden Lane, Jack. I especially love the second and third verses as I knew you were "seeing" Shakespeare taking that bow. Bravo, my friend! Best wishes in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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January 17, 2012 at 9:14 AM
impressive journey Jack.. London sounds lovely .. Madonna still lives there too.. good luck in contest.. next collab contest will u write with me?
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January 16, 2012 at 11:00 PM
Jack,, hi!! ;-) long time no see...lol..well I'm still thinking of that poem for NIkko... weee... and now you have another lovely and clever poem... seems memorable... always,..p.d.
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January 16, 2012 at 5:52 PM
Wowowow. this is great. What inspired you to do one like this? fave!
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January 16, 2012 at 4:01 PM
Wonderful, simply wonderful write Jack! I would've loved to have seen a play there then! I would simply breathe in all the love of the show, and I would really sit and enjoy the sight before me! Great Work!
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January 16, 2012 at 3:15 PM
Enjoyed the flow and rhyme of those..To be there and see an orginal play would have been great but that was not the best era in which to live..I mean conviences wise like running water, warm homes,etc..Sara
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January 16, 2012 at 3:04 PM
I've never been to England, but isn't Stratford on Avon a distance from London? This is a fanciful write.
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January 16, 2012 at 2:14 PM
I really like this one Jack...this is thought provoking..a bit of mystery..well written...BG
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