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Lolling about, down by the lake Just watching the clouds scudding by. Surrounded by fells, a vision of heaven, There is no one as happy as I. I hear little waves lapping the shore, With hypnotic rhythm, they sing. In somnolent bliss I happily drift, Lost in the mood that they bring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/30/2017 4:43:00 PM
Lovely expression of a lakeside scene, Gary. Can just feel myself relaxing by the shore in the cool lake breeze. // Barry.
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/30/2017 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Barry :)
Date: 3/25/2017 3:20:00 PM
Lovely! I close my eyes and remember such lakeside bliss ;) 7 xomo!
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Date: 3/25/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 3/25/2017 1:41:00 PM
I just love this Gary. It brought me back to the lake I floated on at the bottom of the mountain where I used to live. Great poem :)
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Date: 3/25/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 3/25/2017 12:38:00 PM
Stunning, I was there with you, great imagery Gary. A seven
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Date: 3/25/2017 12:39:00 PM
How kind, thank you Elizabeth :)

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