Loiterer

Your image, 
a malfunctioning promise
idles in my handbag.
I took that picture
when I took your word
never expecting both were
two dimensional.
I can’t breathe life into your promises
any more than I can infuse it 
into your photograph
but at least I have something tangible 
in your picture.
The promise remains a myth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 11, 2017 at 6:55 AM
I like your poem, can I make one suggestion? I think 'Shined' should be 'shone' :)
Geiger Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Thank you again. And i think you are referring to a different poem, i will check! Thank you for the advice!
White Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:49 AM
You write great poetry. I like theimage of him, in a handbag, not really there, a myth.
Geiger Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Thank you very much!
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