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Your image, a malfunctioning promise idles in my handbag. I took that picture when I took your word never expecting both were two dimensional. I can’t breathe life into your promises any more than I can infuse it into your photograph but at least I have something tangible in your picture. The promise remains a myth.

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Date: 10/11/2017 6:55:00 AM
I like your poem, can I make one suggestion? I think 'Shined' should be 'shone' :)
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Roseann Geiger
Date: 10/11/2017 10:50:00 AM
Thank you again. And i think you are referring to a different poem, i will check! Thank you for the advice!
Date: 10/11/2017 6:49:00 AM
You write great poetry. I like theimage of him, in a handbag, not really there, a myth.
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Roseann Geiger
Date: 10/11/2017 10:48:00 AM
Thank you very much!

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