Log Cabin

.

           Bam 

            into 
       the limber

   (i meant lumber)

 he plow'd his wedge

            Bam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Breidenthal Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Hard labor and effort and realizing a finished product with pride. Beautiful one. Hope you are well, James. Always, Laura
Peranteau Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:28 PM
;)
Chircop Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 2:46 PM
I LOVE THIS FAST BAM ACTION---I LOVE THE LOG CABIN TOO--SWEET WRITE-----CHARMA
Peranteau Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:31 PM
;} i'm the product uv your wisdom lady Charmaine
Guzzi Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 11:56 AM
great visual and thank you so much for your winning entry into the Baby contest.....Perfect Rythm! Light & Love
Peranteau Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:36 PM
whut ! i won ! i wuz the reason they wrote "computerz for dummies" back when i wrote this ;) good morning
Higgins Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 9:37 AM
This is a very good write my friend..love how you captured the flavor of the log cabin...well done.
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June 17, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Maybe he'll build one of those beautiful log cabins for me, James. Excellent lanterne that reflects the hard work our pioneers put into building their rustic homes. Everything built today pales by comparison in both style and quality. Nice work! You have soup mail, James. Love, Carolyn
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