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Lofty Heels Proud

rigid, stiff
     brave, gutsy women
         silly 
                 slide
          about
               adept, afoul 
                    along
               frost, nippy
                    paths . . . 
                       
             lofty heels proud ! 

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February 19, 2018


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Tripp Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:46 PM
This is great! Too bad stupid (as in..who wears these things?) is a six letter word...lol...Great contest entry!
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Rhoda, thank you, yes stupid would be a great description !
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Well done Constance it's quite a challenge to write this form:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Jan, thank you for the compliment. Oh my gosh this was a challenge for sure ~
One Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:36 PM
This one made me smile..
La France Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Silent, thank you, smiling was the response I wanted ~
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