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LOCUST'S LULLABY
just something light I wrote last night while sitting on our back porch. The sound of the locusts in the background was soothing....
twilight hush descends soothing serenade begins locust's lullaby their tiny wings beat rhythmic symphony quite sweet one played just for you
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Date: 7/17/2025 10:42:00 PM
Beautiful haiku. I too love listening to the soothing serenade of crickets and cicadas. I feel the image you have shown is that of a cicada and not of a locust. The personal note at the end is so endearing.
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Date: 7/17/2025 4:48:00 PM
I enjoyed this Haiku created by you. Write On! Bill
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Date: 7/17/2025 12:04:00 PM
I so love that last line. It made the poem unique. Enjoyed - <3
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 4:41:00 PM
awww, thank you...sending you hugs, <3 Sara
Date: 7/17/2025 6:34:00 AM
Lovely to celebrate a quiet evening.
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 4:41:00 PM
yes, it truly is. Have a pleasant evening, hugs
Date: 7/17/2025 6:01:00 AM
These fleeting times hold immense value. You are really good at showing them kindness and respect. Nods cheerfully!
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Date: 7/17/2025 4:42:00 PM
thank you for your visit, Sotto, and for your insightful and kind words. I appreciate the cheerful nod!
Date: 7/17/2025 4:43:00 AM
Sara, thanks for sharing. These moments are very precious. You have a way of enshrining them with kindness. Smiles!!
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 4:31:00 PM
aww, what wonderful comments. You made my day. Thanks and smiles back at you!

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