Locked Out

I came home and found him
Holed up with my best friend,
This time it’s definitely the end, I cried.
They sighed, their eyes met,
They rolled out of bed
And strolled out onto the balcony for a cigarette.
‘That’s life’, they shrugged, and shared a secret smile.
I shut the balcony doors behind them,
Hoped the rush-hour crowd would find them entertaining.
I turned the key, turned up the TV,
‘No, this is life’, I said,
Re-made the bed, from scratch (no patch),
Ordered a pizza and opened the wine,
And noticed, with a smile,
That it was raining.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Man Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:20 AM
Wow.. love your story. Write me another!!
Leslie Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 6:49 PM
.. and might I add.... I love the rain.
Leslie Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Haha, love it! ;)
Rodd Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 5:22 PM
A terrific "in- yer- face" poem! If poetry has a 'middle finger,' this is it!
Vinson Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Ha! The reader definitely ends up smiling here too. ; )
White Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Ohhh... hahaha, at first I felt so sad,. but then after the first three lines, I started to smile, and after that? I laughed out loud. Thisd is a GREAT poem, I love it!
Alexander Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Thanks, Darren, glad you enjoyed it!
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