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Locked Away POTD

Peter Perkins loved tasty pumpkin, in pies, in puddings and etcetera; Which filled their house with tempting smells, so said his wife, Elena. Beloved Elena was a splendid cook, to which fond Peter could attest, With hand over his crimson heart, like rouge sun dyeing in the west. The Perkins had a bouncy pet rabbit; and they called him 'Scamper,' Like pretty, fall leaves forever flying, in hues red, purple and amber. Frigid days had turned fragrant, and the friendly friends came calling, And flirtatious, warm breezes flitted, over emerald fields, sprawling. Finite, foggy dawn had vanished, when flattering rays flooded noon; And fave, forever family came for visits, at the onset of mellow June. They lived in the house of sweetness, and of delicious desserts, daily, In the times of sun glazed windows, looking out on pretty, pink daisy. Twilight, sapphire skies glorified stars, on their scenic, sunset street; And they took daily scent strolls, to smile at fine people they'd meet. Nonnegligent nature was naturally beautiful, when neighbors visited, In noiseless, green hours of dulcet notes, and pink robin, uninhibited. 'Slime' lily's long tresses were curling, awaiting silvery drops of rain; As 'true blood' roses lay wounded, and 'spiral' aloe soothed their pain. Peter and Elena were planning a trip abroad, their fare already paid; When Peter suddenly reinjured his kinee, ruining the plans they made! As the doctor advised only limited walking, a trip was unwise for him; But, he couldn't keep Elena from her dream, based on a fateful whim! Their tickets were nonrefundable, and he would miss his wife dearly; But Elena would have a wonderful time, as pretty, fall leaves do, yearly. Elena bought a curio pumpkin house. Its rosy panes seemed to smile; And placed inside her small photo, to stay close, across distant miles. Whenever Peter gazed at his gift, it brought smiles, rather than sighs; Like the last gasp of vermilion sunset, afore the silver, moonlight prize! 'Peter, Peter pumpkin eater, Had a wife but couldn't keep her; He put her in a pumpkin shell And there he kept her very well.'
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Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 10:56 PM
Back with a belated congrats on your well deserved POTD
Buehler Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 2:43 PM
I'm so delighted. Thank you for your kind congratuations. :)
M  Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 3:39 AM
Congratulations Evelyn on POTD! Debx
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Thank you for your warm congratulations, Deb. Hugs and blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Congrats on POTD, dear Evelyn! What a lovely twist to the story!
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 9:30 PM
Thank you for your gracious words, my friend. :)
Nicole Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 4:20 PM
Evelyn, you always paint such vivid images with your words. Such a clever and creative take on this nursery rhyme. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 7:11 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks, dear Brandy. Blessings and hugs. :)
Roper Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on your POTD
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 4:08 PM
I appreciate your kind thought, Eve. :)
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:18 PM
Evelyn, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 4:07 PM
Heartfelt thanks, my friend.
Kauffman Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Just delightful, Evelyn! What a great expansion of the nursery rhyme - a touching story of commitment and selfless love. Congratulations on your POTD. I always love the inventive, creative stories! Sending you blessings of autumn joy!
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 4:02 PM
Your very gracious words are received with delight, dear Sam, Thank you very much. :)
May Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Wonderful write Evelyn, Congrats on POTD
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:59 PM
My deepest thanks to you, Joseph :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. which I enjoyed reading.
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:58 PM
Your remarks create a lovely spot in my day. Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Locked Away" write/story again. Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win..................
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Thank you for your very valued words of congratulations, Paula.
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Delightfl! Serendipity to the max, Evelyn! Made my morning and afternoon, reading this one. Love the alliteration too. Congrats on POTD! ~ Pete R. Ider
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Thank you for your words of congratulations and appreciation, Gershon. Nice to know this poem made your morning and afternoon. A prolonged parting is difficult. I sure hope Peter's patience doesn't 'peter' out. :0
Greenhough Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on a very overdue POTD. This is one of the best.
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:37 PM
Thank you so much, Hilda. Your comments are pure delight. :)
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 6:49 AM
- What a delightful poem, Evelyn :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:35 PM
I am very gratified, Anne-Lise. Thank you. :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Evelyn, fun and creative, congratulations on POTD.
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:33 PM
I appreciate your remarks so much, Tania. Many blessings.
Gifford Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:59 AM
Enjoyed reading your lovely poem, Evelyn. Congratulations on your POTD win. Sending blessings your way.
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:32 PM
Your well wishes and delightful remarks are most appreciated, Zyrool. Kindest regards. :)
Williams Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:17 AM
Dear Evelyn, your heartwarming poem captures the warmth of a loving partnership, the beauty of nature’s seasons, and the joy found in life’s simple, shared moments, and of course complete understand and unselfish love. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD...Hugs
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:29 PM
I am happy that this poem resonated with you, dear friend. Thank you for your lovely words of congratulations. Hugs and blessings.
Read Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:13 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poem Evelyn, a well deserved POTD. Xx
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:22 PM
I thank you for the lingering smiles, John. Blessings and hugs. :)
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November 10, 2024 at 1:15 AM
Marvellous Evelyn, enjoyed reading your story/poem very much. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Dear Beryl, thank you so much for your thoughtful, kind comments. Very best wishes. :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 1:04 AM
Love your take on the story Evelyn, very creative verse, congratulations on today's POTD honour Tom
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Thank you, Tom. Your kind words bring deep delight.
Tor Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 12:48 AM
Evelyn I had no doubt this would be Honored today. Your skills and abilities are rewarded with your magnificent Couplet. I am so happy for you to have won today a deserving Honor to receive. I love this creation of yours. Enjoy all your applause from all of us. A much deserved Congratulations for receiving this High Honor Of POTD, the Poetry Soup Team definitely got it right...
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Your kind confidence and treaured words of congratulations are a joy, dear Michael. Thank you very much. Blessings.
Meadows Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 12:38 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:09 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks. Blessings.
Jones Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 12:33 AM
Wow you have a wonderful imagination and way with words! Congratulations on your potd honor!
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 3:08 PM
Thank you for your kind words of congratulations, dear Karen. :)
Greenhough Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 6:19 PM
This is a clever write. I see you changed the story a bit. It is more humane the way you say it. Your poems are fun.
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 9:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your very nice remarks, Hilda. I'm very glad to hear these poems are fun. I hope your weekend is lovely.
One Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Your poem captures the warmth and humor of a loving, simple life, paying tribute to a relationship filled with small joys and mutual devotion. The natural imagery, playful word choice, and warm tone make the poem feel like a delightful fable, celebrating love, home, and the comfort of familiar rituals. By reimagining “Peter, Peter pumpkin eater” with a twist, the poem transforms a nursery rhyme into a narrative about the joy of shared companionship and the little gestures that keep love close, even across miles.
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 6:15 PM
Thank you sharing your kind insights and warm compliments, Silent One. What joy it is to read your comment! Blessings, my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 9:27 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Locked Away" write/story. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 12:11 PM
So glad you enjoyed this, Paula. Thank you for making my day. Blessings
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