Loch Ness - Constanza Premiere Contest Winner

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Oh, Loch Ness monster, there you are,
from depths below to surface came...
and Nessie you are called by name.

'Neath eerie moon that glows afar
and thunder clouds with battle cries
that summon lightning to the skies,

you raise your head, just like a star
in monster films, yet you seem real,
and slink with prehistoric zeal.

You come and go...it's so bizarre;
a myth, non-fiction, no one knows,
so short-lived are your sudden shows.

What world below has met your bar,
within the Loch Ness mystery,
that grants you space in history?

Oh, Loch Ness monster, there you are.
Neath eerie moon that glows afar,
you raise your head, just like a star.
You come and go...it's so bizarre.
What world below has met your bar?


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Loch Ness
Sponsor: Thivia Shetley
Constanza Form
Judged: 01/31/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/31/2018 7:26:00 PM
Gosh Sandra, I am just reading this wonderful Constanza you have created. I am so impressed with the way you have captured the mystery of this loveable myth I have a fondness for. I am elated you were honored with First place! Congratulations! This has to go into my Faves! : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:42:00 PM
Hi, Connie, thank you very much for your very uplifting and positive comments and congrats. I just love using your form! For me, it was perfect for this mystical theme. I really appreciate your visits and support so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/31/2018 5:48:00 PM
YOu did an amazing job here and that is why you got the top spot! Congrats, SAndra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for your lovely comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/31/2018 2:59:00 PM
Great poem Sandra, congrats :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gary, for your visit and supportive comment. Sandra :)
Date: 1/31/2018 2:34:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful winner of a poem. Congrats, Sandra. Superbly done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Line, for your very uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/31/2018 1:37:00 PM
It's like looking at the picture, but in word form. Brilliantly done Sandra. Congrats on your win. Regards Tom.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom, for your visit, supportive comments, and congrats. Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Date: 1/31/2018 12:22:00 PM
Awesome write, Sandra, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, for your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/31/2018 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful...a winner for sure! Congrats on your top win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2018 7:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/28/2017 2:07:00 PM
Well done Sandra, best wishes for a successful contest and a great New Year...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:45:00 PM
Thank you once again, Charlie, for your visit and uplifting comments. Happy New Year! Sandra
Date: 12/28/2017 11:30:00 AM
You choose to do a Constanza, Connie will be pleased, not only that you used her form, but that you did it so well! Beautiful lines and flow, Sandra, from first to last line, I love the poem. All the best ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2017 2:44:00 PM
Thank you once again, CayCay, for your visit and uplifting comments. Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
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