Llama In Trauma

There once was a Peruvian llama
Whose owner shipped him to Alabama
  Horns blaring, lights flashing
  Folks screaming, cars crashing
All points lookout ~ one llama in trauma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Flood Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 4:44 AM
Never alarm llama. Fun Limerick, Gershon. Terry
Krutsinger Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 1:51 AM
I would be fighting them all if I was that llama.
Sands Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Oh my. Certainly a traumatized Llama. Keep up your entertaining writing Gershon . I hope your day is going well :)
Bauer Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 11:59 AM
very cute, gershon! i enjoyed...
Leffanta Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 11:35 AM
and all within spitting distance . . . .Aloha!
Boles Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 2:03 AM
Hahaha, man, this is priceless! So; The Llama was looking for her Mama, got dinged went into a coma, now the zookeeper had a dilemma. Mama Mia!...oh well, I tried. Raise your Winner's Flag G.W.!!...ab
Cunningham Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 1:13 AM
Lol, from the peace of the country to the crash, bang wallop of the city. Enough to give anyone trauma. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Oh no! I love llamas!
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 7:48 PM
Uh-oh. Better set foot for Alabama, Susanna! lol :)
Faulkner Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 7:13 PM
Very original, gw, I would never have thought to rhyme 'llama' with 'Alabama' - quite inventive :)
Hankins Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Aw, this is precious, gw. I love your rhyme choices especially. I never met a llama in Alabama who wasn't in trauma! Yes!
Hankins Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 9:02 PM
Come to think of it, you'd be more apt to see a llama in Alabama than in Yokohama!
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Almost chose Yokohama i/o Alabama. My 'white privilege' showing perhaps, eh?! lol. ~ gw
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