Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Lizzy Dear

Lizzy dear I wish you could hear.. 
Your sky is young and bright and oh so clear..
A vision before her time that writes of days..
Some sad some happy but always in her way.. 
A dreamer and a Poet with second sight..
A pure pleasure to be anywhere near her light..

Dedicaton to Lizzy Bark
Soups Brightest young Poet...

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Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2014 at 12:03 PM Michael, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2011 at 4:44 PM a wonderful poem by the way... enjoyed,.. and congrats,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2011 at 4:43 PM GOOD DAY m.j. HOW ARE YOU/ AS FOR ME. i posted our collab~ hope you enjoy it.. i sure did.. by the way..lol.. i could have gone long..on the poem.. sorry i went overboard .. please paste and enter it in my contest... super enjoyed,..p.d.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 21, 2011 at 7:57 AM Congrats on your win, friend,,,sj

Michael J. Falotico July 20, 2011 at 3:13 PM Thank you all so much for such amazing sweet comments... Please do check out her poetry... Her ever kind comments to me has stolen a piece of my heart which she now has for ever.... Please thank her also for the inspiration....

James Fraser July 20, 2011 at 3:07 PM Delightful words in dedication to a young one on the Soup. I must check out this lassies poetry. Thank you for writing this piece and highlighting this youngster Michael. Have a terrific evening :)

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet July 20, 2011 at 12:42 PM Wow Micheal this was terrific.Congrats on this 3rd.place win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Jack Horne July 20, 2011 at 7:24 AM Just letting you know I've changed my entry, Michael - someone pointed out that I'd got the form mixed up with another - so I've changed the entry and just updated it (it still has the same title). Hope that's OK

Debbie Guzzi July 19, 2011 at 1:34 PM Oh I must go read her! Good job promoting! Congrad's Light & Love

Jack Horne July 19, 2011 at 11:17 AM Many congrats on your win, Michael : )

Nette Onclaud July 19, 2011 at 10:49 AM sweet cheers to you for a fantastic win, michael.... lizzy will be proud! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta July 19, 2011 at 8:20 AM My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Michael

Wilma Neels July 19, 2011 at 6:26 AM Hey there Michael, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest with this beauty :) lfde Wilma

Elaine George July 19, 2011 at 5:08 AM Beautiful tribute, I will look her up. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2011 at 4:42 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest "Anything Goes" Michael. Love, Carol

Cory Long July 19, 2011 at 3:49 AM congrats on your win, with this exceptional win cory

David Williams July 18, 2011 at 11:55 PM congrats on your win, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 18, 2011 at 8:21 PM Congrats Michael on another dynamic win with this dynamite welcome poetry .. enjoy luv.. as we all welcome her to the fold....J.G. in tired mode..

Elizabeth Bark July 17, 2011 at 7:11 PM micheal thank you so much for my poem. ill treasure it forever:) ill try to write one for you in return:) love you deary....lizzy:) Michael J. Falotico July 22, 2011 at 9:01 AM All true words my poet friend... you are learning at a young age but as you grow you still have to be opened minded enough to learn more... im learning that every day..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 17, 2011 at 7:04 PM Nice tribute and dedication to Lizzy, Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 17, 2011 at 3:22 PM You sure are so sweet to write for Lizzy--I have to check out her poetry soon :D -- hugs your way :)

Jack Horne July 17, 2011 at 1:42 PM What a lovely tribute to Lizzy Bark - I'll have to look out for her : )

Dawn Mclaughlin July 17, 2011 at 1:27 PM Beautiful Write Michael, thank you so much for your kind comment x

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2011 at 12:15 PM Good write honoring this person..I don't think that I have read any of her work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Judy Ball July 17, 2011 at 11:43 AM What a lovely tribute to this young poet. I'm sure she is thrilled with it. God Bless, JB Michael J. Falotico July 22, 2011 at 9:02 AM Yes she is and thank you...

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