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Living Waters

Reflections of life gently flows
Time removes rough edges
A sigh;
There is continuance from throes
Water goes from ledges
To fly.

Edward J Ebbs - 03/06/2015


Written for a Contest, MEMENTO OF WATERS

Copyright © Edward Ebbs | Year Posted 2015

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Vladislav Raven Date: 2/10/2016 5:10:00 PM Hi Ed, another excellent write from your pen. The waters do flow through your timely pen in a beautiful poetic vision. I enjoyed this peaceful write Ed. It has to be top rating. A seven my friend. May your pen always run gold....Vladislav Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 8/22/2015 12:46:00 PM Ed, so wonderfully written and congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, fluttering gems Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/28/2015 10:33:00 PM hey, you did the rhyme I posed!! Congrats, ed. Very nicely won. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 3/28/2015 1:54:00 PM Wonderful images in your poem, Ed. I like the way you interpreted that visual. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/28/2015 9:27:00 PM Thank You Sandra :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/27/2015 2:38:00 PM Congratulations on your win, beautifully written.A 7 Blessings and hugs Eve Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/28/2015 5:12:00 AM Thank you Eve :)

Kp Nunez Date: 3/27/2015 6:26:00 AM A thoughtful quality to your lovely write, Ed. Congratulations! Kim :) Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/27/2015 8:49:00 AM Thank you Kim :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/26/2015 11:50:00 PM Lovely, flowing images...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/27/2015 8:48:00 AM Thank you Rhonda:)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 3/26/2015 6:01:00 PM so delightful Ed lovely congrats on win hugs 7 Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/27/2015 8:48:00 AM Thank You Shadow :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/26/2015 3:54:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Ed:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/27/2015 8:47:00 AM Thanks Jan :)

Constance La France Date: 3/14/2015 5:51:00 AM Ed, beautifully written verse for the contest, best of luck and thanks for you comment on my poetry today . . . Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/14/2015 4:18:00 PM Thanks from Oregon :)

Robert Johnson Date: 3/13/2015 9:07:00 AM shchshsch. That's life water's going down the drain. :) Your journey is much more desirable. :) Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/14/2015 4:17:00 PM It would be wonderful to fly. I have considered many times to get a glider pilot rating to soar :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/12/2015 10:36:00 PM I came back here and thought of something. you should say :water goes from ledges. That way you would have an exact rhyme with edges in the stanza above! Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/14/2015 4:14:00 PM Thanks...pondering :)

Sharlotte Newan Date: 3/12/2015 10:35:00 PM I like this one too. Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/14/2015 4:13:00 PM Thanks Shallot :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/10/2015 6:13:00 PM Nice one. It's great to see all the entries in these kinds of contests. Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/10/2015 10:05:00 PM Yes, different perspectives are a learning experience...

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2015 10:11:00 AM Beautifully penned - Nette has set a tough challenge - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Edward Ebbs Date: 3/8/2015 7:46:00 PM Jan, you are always there with support, Thank You :)