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Living Waters

Reflections of life gently flows
Time removes rough edges
A sigh;
There is continuance from throes
Water goes from ledges
To fly.

Edward J Ebbs - 03/06/2015


Written for a Contest, MEMENTO OF WATERS

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Vladislav Raven February 10, 2016 at 5:10 PM Hi Ed, another excellent write from your pen. The waters do flow through your timely pen in a beautiful poetic vision. I enjoyed this peaceful write Ed. It has to be top rating. A seven my friend. May your pen always run gold....Vladislav

Constance La France August 22, 2015 at 12:46 PM Ed, so wonderfully written and congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, fluttering gems

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2015 at 10:33 PM hey, you did the rhyme I posed!! Congrats, ed. Very nicely won.

Sandra Haight March 28, 2015 at 1:54 PM Wonderful images in your poem, Ed. I like the way you interpreted that visual. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra Edward Ebbs March 28, 2015 at 9:27 PM Thank You Sandra :)

Eve Roper March 27, 2015 at 2:38 PM Congratulations on your win, beautifully written.A 7 Blessings and hugs Eve Edward Ebbs March 28, 2015 at 5:12 AM Thank you Eve :)

Kp Nunez March 27, 2015 at 6:26 AM A thoughtful quality to your lovely write, Ed. Congratulations! Kim :) Edward Ebbs March 27, 2015 at 8:49 AM Thank you Kim :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 26, 2015 at 11:50 PM Lovely, flowing images...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda Edward Ebbs March 27, 2015 at 8:48 AM Thank you Rhonda:)

Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 6:01 PM so delightful Ed lovely congrats on win hugs 7 Edward Ebbs March 27, 2015 at 8:48 AM Thank You Shadow :)

Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 3:54 PM Dropping back with my congrats Ed:-) Hugs Jan xx Edward Ebbs March 27, 2015 at 8:47 AM Thanks Jan :)

Constance La France March 14, 2015 at 5:51 AM Ed, beautifully written verse for the contest, best of luck and thanks for you comment on my poetry today . . . Edward Ebbs March 14, 2015 at 4:18 PM Thanks from Oregon :)

Robert Johnson March 13, 2015 at 9:07 AM shchshsch. That's life water's going down the drain. :) Your journey is much more desirable. :) Edward Ebbs March 14, 2015 at 4:17 PM It would be wonderful to fly. I have considered many times to get a glider pilot rating to soar :)

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2015 at 10:36 PM I came back here and thought of something. you should say :water goes from ledges. That way you would have an exact rhyme with edges in the stanza above! Edward Ebbs March 14, 2015 at 4:14 PM Thanks...pondering :)

Sharlotte Newan March 12, 2015 at 10:35 PM I like this one too. Edward Ebbs March 14, 2015 at 4:13 PM Thanks Shallot :)

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2015 at 6:13 PM Nice one. It's great to see all the entries in these kinds of contests. Edward Ebbs March 10, 2015 at 10:05 PM Yes, different perspectives are a learning experience...

Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 10:11 AM Beautifully penned - Nette has set a tough challenge - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Edward Ebbs March 8, 2015 at 7:46 PM Jan, you are always there with support, Thank You :)