Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

Living Waters

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                                     Living Waters flow from the high mountain
                                         Cascading Waterfall invites one, all
                                       No stagnant cistern water here contain
                                     Living Waters flow from the high mountain
                                     Healing, refreshes, comforts gives life gain
                                       If one will accept it, their spirit not stall
                                     Living Waters flow from the high mountain
                                         Cascading Waterfall invites one, all

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 16, 2010 at 3:39 AM Sara, This is absolutely beautiful. It is a well written and spiritual triolet. Love, Dane Ann

James Fraser January 14, 2010 at 1:44 PM Wonderful Triolet Sara >> James

Mary Meade Stephenson January 13, 2010 at 5:51 PM A powerful message of His truth you have so eloquently penned here Sara...very uplifting and refreshing! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Your kind comments and words of encouragement are very truly appreciated! Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary

Debbie Guzzi January 13, 2010 at 1:53 PM cleansing! cold....refreshing! Light & Love

John Freeman January 13, 2010 at 9:14 AM Yes, for sure no stagnant water from living waters Sara. Offers new life and healling, Love more abundant. Love your Triolet form Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Doris Culverhouse January 13, 2010 at 8:54 AM beautiful porm, enjoyed reading today.

Kim Hilliker January 12, 2010 at 11:50 AM Beautiful poem. You take us there. Thanks for sharing.

Danny Nunn January 12, 2010 at 11:46 AM Your poem make me fishing on a cool high mountain stream, does not get any better than that...good write..Danny

John Beam January 12, 2010 at 11:05 AM Glad to be welcomed, thank you I thank the Good Lord Jesus most of all for his wonderful gifts and you are one of them blessings living waters great style I am still learning the different styles keep smiling Jesus loves You!

Jared Pickett January 12, 2010 at 9:48 AM Awesome Triolet Sara... I like this style..... Keep em comin'....:JP}

Edward Orozco January 12, 2010 at 9:48 AM Beautiful form! I really enjoyed it thanks for sharing!- edward

Joyce Johnson January 12, 2010 at 9:22 AM This is lovely. I enjoy the triolet form. Thank you for your kind comments about my poem. , "Did I Tell Him". It wasn't a winner but I m glad you think it worthy. Thanks for the note about your wonderful daddy. I too prayed when I was small that I could keep my daddy until I was really old. Thirty five or so, so I wouldn't be so devastated. My daddy died at 79. I was thiry five. I still miss him. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2010 at 6:55 AM Sara, thanks for your kind comment, and may I say, this is a very fine triolet message for us, and anything with waterfalls, then join it together with the melodic rhythm of the refrain, you have a flowing beautiful poem. LUv, Andrea

P Sheart January 12, 2010 at 5:19 AM Hi Sara, A beautiful Triolet. Love this. The river is so empowering. I have a waterfall just a couple of miles walk from my house. The river itself is just a half mile. I can hear it from my house in the spring through fall. I commune with it almost daily. It's below -4 today so I may skip my walk. Burrr! Take care my friend. Love Light Patty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 12, 2010 at 4:59 AM Need this one toady.. I will be off the Soup this week as I have Jury Duty all week.. so gotta go now but I knew u would have something special for me to read.. so glad I did... gotta go...talk next week for sure.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..