Living Scent Inhale

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This is my picture of my running pale pink rose..I don't know the species name..It has been a great enjoyment to me..

My mother loved red roses the tea kind..I have one similar to this one and I enjoy taking pictures after a rain or heavy dew...

. Love of those roses Red ones your favorite hue Your burial shroud Love of running roses Pale pink my favorite hue Living scent inhale Sponsor:^Rick Parise Contest: Ancient Song

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/24/2011 2:22:00 PM

Lovely write on roses, Sara. My gran loved red roses, like your mom. Yuour rose bish is a beauty. We have a lot in the garden, but none of them have flowers this late in the year. I love the fragrant ones - my favouirite is a pink one that smells just like a bar of soap. Not a good description, I know, LOL. A very happy Thanksgiving to you, my friend : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2011 4:29:00 PM

Nicely done, Sara. By the way, I may be wrong, but I think he wanted two stanzas from us?

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/23/2011 2:26:00 PM

* "Owww, I Love This * My Precious Sweet Beautiful Sara * Roses Red & Pink * Tis My Most Favourite Colour of They All * Sooo Softly Pleasant & Pleasing Unto The Senses Its Hues * Very Deep & Absolutely Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/20/2011 9:51:00 PM

What a wonderful write!! I enjoy the separate meaning between the colors of the two roses! I would have said white for yours, cause it would represent purity, innocence, love from the heart in a godly sense! I loved this poem!! Fantastic work!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/20/2011 6:44:00 PM

Beautiful...I really enjoyed this one..gets better with each reading. BG

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/20/2011 6:25:00 PM

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Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 2:47:00 PM

go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet