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Living On the Scars

Where did the role of soul leave? Blind in directions, lost in destination Escaped amid to the extraneous crowds As if gone shattered like the whisper of dusk Peace of mind seemed to be fade and mortal Like a starlight with less of hope There was no love, no sorrow Everything placed as ghosts Will it able to question If you hold all the answers Will it able to survive If you bury all of your sides Confusion... Mind occupied.... The uncertainty rule the roost Thirst caressing for longing Wondering for the cure, arrested in anxiety

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/4/2013 4:37:00 PM
I love this. Thats simply all there is to say. Its beautiful.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/4/2013 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Jay, pleasure to have a visit by you :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/3/2013 11:52:00 AM
As always you have a way with words that is so unique to you.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/3/2013 4:39:00 PM
Thank you Rick :D you also had a unique idea to expressed :D
Date: 2/3/2013 4:52:00 AM
Sad thoughts in your beautiful poem, Yanny. - Well done! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/3/2013 5:13:00 AM
Thank you Anne :D wishing you a greatdaythere :D
Date: 2/3/2013 4:01:00 AM
Beautiful poem!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/3/2013 4:44:00 AM
Thank you vesna, really glad to see you around :) have a great day :D
Date: 2/1/2013 1:18:00 AM
Lovely write Yanny, Good Luck ...
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/1/2013 2:48:00 AM
Thank you Menhaz :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/31/2013 9:37:00 PM
Nicely Written. To me; this is a glorious write. Well done!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/31/2013 10:07:00 PM
Thank yo Lillie your words are really uplifting, glad that you like it :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/31/2013 7:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem nice pick of words i enjoyed your writing
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/31/2013 9:50:00 PM
Thank you April :D Glad to have a visit by you :D

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