Living On the Scars

Where did the role of soul leave?
Blind in directions, lost in destination
Escaped amid to the extraneous crowds
As if gone shattered like the whisper of dusk

Peace of mind seemed to be fade and mortal
Like a starlight with less of hope
There was no love, no sorrow
Everything placed as ghosts

Will it able to question
If you hold all the answers
Will it able to survive
If you bury all of your sides

Confusion...
Mind occupied....

The uncertainty rule the roost
Thirst caressing for longing
Wondering for the cure, arrested in anxiety
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Loveless Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 4:37 PM
I love this. Thats simply all there is to say. Its beautiful.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Jay, pleasure to have a visit by you :D - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 11:52 AM
As always you have a way with words that is so unique to you.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Thank you Rick :D you also had a unique idea to expressed :D
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 4:52 AM
Sad thoughts in your beautiful poem, Yanny. - Well done! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 5:13 AM
Thank you Anne :D wishing you a greatdaythere :D
Kovrlija Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 4:01 AM
Beautiful poem!
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February 3, 2013 at 4:44 AM
Thank you vesna, really glad to see you around :) have a great day :D
Veetil Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 1:18 AM
Lovely write Yanny, Good Luck ...
Widjanarko Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 2:48 AM
Thank you Menhaz :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 9:37 PM
Nicely Written. To me; this is a glorious write. Well done!
Widjanarko Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 10:07 PM
Thank yo Lillie your words are really uplifting, glad that you like it :D - hug, yanny
Mitchell Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Beautiful poem nice pick of words i enjoyed your writing
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January 31, 2013 at 9:50 PM
Thank you April :D Glad to have a visit by you :D
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