Living Inside a Coffin

Inside a coffin, yet I breathe…
Surprised! For I had woven my own wreath.

My body was by nobody murdered
It was life itself that surrendered.

To life I think I gave my best
Put up the happiest face no matter what it’s jest!

A lesson for me though I learnt it late
Nobody has power, it’s you who writes your own fate.

The fear of losing the ones’ I love the most
Chased me everywhere like an unseen ghost!

The universe like a genie reading my mind:
“what ever in her heart let her find!”

In my heart was a plethora of fears,
Of losing more people, ensuing more tears.

Who says life is complicated? I believe it’s as simple as that:
What you most want you never get!

Making a last wish I pray for death,
Lying inside my coffin, counting every breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/19/2016 10:04:00 PM
this is an epic and deep write... LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 11:04:00 AM
deep write
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Date: 8/7/2015 9:27:00 AM
The angst of seeing the bright horizon but not being able to touch it comes through. the feeling of surrender to fate comes through strongly. Kind regards, Ian
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Date: 8/7/2015 9:25:00 AM
The angst of seeing the bright horizon but not being able to touch it comes through. the feeling of surrender to fate comes through strongly. Kid regards, Ian
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Date: 8/7/2015 4:33:00 AM
A bit morbid Varsha, But very powerful touching piece You've expressed everything very well Best Wishes Kevin
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