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We turned a knob, and ventured back, into the place, we dwelled Standing here, within these walls, ..a cottage small, accrued travails ago But clearly see that all is well, ...all is well, ...we need not come again
___________________________ In honor of Deb's contest: "Trinity"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/24/2012 8:45:00 PM
Carrie, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:03:00 PM
Carrie,, love your win...pd
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Date: 11/8/2012 11:37:00 PM
I remember this one well. Congrats on the well deserved win, Carrie.
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Carrie - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:03:00 PM
A tender write, full of longing for a master poet. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2012 11:43:00 AM
So much more than 3 lines..very nice..congrats. BG
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win xx
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2012 8:09:00 PM
Well done, Carrie! Jimbo
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Date: 11/3/2012 1:51:00 AM
VEry interesting way to approach her theme, Carrie. I sure like your sijo. Really, sijo is the only way to go in contest such as this one. Debs hardly likes any of my haiku. haha
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Date: 11/2/2012 4:40:00 PM
This is a lovely and well written sijo/poem Carrie. - Have a great weekend - - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2012 2:57:00 PM
A beautiful and wistful sijo.
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