Living In Today

We turned a knob, and ventured back, into the place, we dwelled Standing here, within these walls, ..a cottage small, accrued travails ago But clearly see that all is well, ...all is well, ...we need not come again
___________________________ In honor of Deb's contest: "Trinity"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 24, 2012 at 8:45 PM
Carrie, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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November 10, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Carrie,, love your win...pd
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:37 PM
I remember this one well. Congrats on the well deserved win, Carrie.
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 3:08 PM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Carrie - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 3:03 PM
A tender write, full of longing for a master poet. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:43 AM
So much more than 3 lines..very nice..congrats. BG
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November 8, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on your fine win xx
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Well done, Carrie! Jimbo
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 1:51 AM
VEry interesting way to approach her theme, Carrie. I sure like your sijo. Really, sijo is the only way to go in contest such as this one. Debs hardly likes any of my haiku. haha
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November 2, 2012 at 4:40 PM
This is a lovely and well written sijo/poem Carrie. - Have a great weekend - - / / Anne-Lise :)
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November 2, 2012 at 2:57 PM
A beautiful and wistful sijo.
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