Living In the Gray

Sometimes I find myself living in the grays
I stay there for days and days
My world lacks contrast
Shadows disappear 
I am somewhere that isn't here

My land is encompased in a virtual haze
A fog so thick it blocks out sun rays
I search and grope for different ways
I can't see forward or behind
Complacency has blocked my mind
No ambition 
I wonder why
I lack the desire to try

A finger tip and then a hand
Caressesing my face removing the bland
The light floods in
I start to feel
I can't get enough of this savory meal
Now I wonder was it just a dream
I start to move forward 
picking up steam

Colors so bright 
Now I realize
It was an internal veil that blocked my eyes
Sometimes all it takes is someone's hand
To escape from a world of gray and bland

A kiss a smile
Perhaps an embrace
A gentle hand lightly placed
Now the light and dark are clearly traced
All my gray has been erased
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Widjanarko Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Wow, this is deep, and love how it starts, love how it ends, really a refreshing inspiration that you share in my morning :D, I'm still working on my sestina, I'm about to make it into free verse :), wishing you a wonderful day Rick :D - hug, Yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Thanks Yanny, let me know when your poem is done. I hope your day is as wonderful as you are. It would then be a most wonderful day!
Henderson Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 12:14 AM
Sound like the deep blues. Wrote one similar about being color blind. Can't imagine the stigma of never knowing color.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Thanks Charles
Hicks Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 11:42 PM
Gray is really an unattractive color isn't it? The color that lacks any passion... it's just bleak. I am glad you know that person that can wash that all the way! Great flow and use of rhymes in this one!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Thanks Timothy
Bunch Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 10:55 PM
This is a great poem. I have many favorite poets, that have you as a favorite poet, and I see why. Thanks so much for your comment. I will, for sure, visiting your poems a little more, thanks so much again. I know i mentioned it, but I really like this poem. Whatever we can get from that speacial person, is like magic, it transforms us. Great work.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Wayland.
Jones Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:09 PM
Beautiful Richard. So much truth in this for all of us.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:13 PM
thanks Donna, nice to see your smiling face.
Manassian Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 11:46 AM
Richard....this is amazing. I agree with Becca....you have a wonderful gift. I wrote something along the same lines entitled LOST...I haven't posted it...Perhaps I will sometime soon! Thanks for sharing...
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 2:13 PM
I look forward to reading it, let me know when you post it.
Squyres Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 9:18 AM
ahhhh emerging from our own veils.. love this !!! Excellent !!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Thanks Debra
Hunter Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 9:00 AM
This poem is deep, translucent, and clear all at the same time. I think it's great!...and I Love that title!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Thanks Caleb
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