Living In a Bottle

Encased in glass I sit,
nothing but a mound of sand.
My bottle tilted, in a pit,
it smell like some cheap liquir brand.

A cork in the top, that I can't free,
no matter how hard I try.
If only I could escape, and see the world's glee,
I would fall to my knees and yell to the sky.

Here I stay, in my bottle of glass,
waiting for someone, something, to help me.
But nobody cares, they all just pass,
forever in my bottle, is where I'll be.

10/14/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hortobagyi Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 10:10 PM
Wow man i know just how you feel. You are a good inspiration :)
Amato Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 7:01 PM
So glad you posted this one, love it.
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