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Living In a Bottle

Encased in glass I sit, nothing but a mound of sand. My bottle tilted, in a pit, it smell like some cheap liquir brand. A cork in the top, that I can't free, no matter how hard I try. If only I could escape, and see the world's glee, I would fall to my knees and yell to the sky. Here I stay, in my bottle of glass, waiting for someone, something, to help me. But nobody cares, they all just pass, forever in my bottle, is where I'll be. 10/14/09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/29/2009 10:10:00 PM
Wow man i know just how you feel. You are a good inspiration :)
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Date: 10/24/2009 7:01:00 PM
So glad you posted this one, love it.
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