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Living For Both of Us

I run toward Lois in my dreams saving her Protecting her, insulating her from the big bad guy But alas, she disappears moments before I arrive She was a good friend, we had so many laughs. She had the best laugh in the neighborhood I still hear her laugh in my dreams. She died at the hands of a madman when she was fourteen. Her body left under a bridge for younger children to find For a town to find, so they could grieve and pity her mother I look beyond her death to her life Remembering her tittering smile and her love for animals Trying to live my life the best I can, as I am now living for both of us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/3/2020 10:31:00 PM
What a Lovely Poem. Friendship is a wonderful thing especially when it lasts forever with no conditions like pure love...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/4/2020 12:56:00 AM
Thank you Shirley. I appreciate it.
Date: 3/3/2020 7:36:00 AM
This is a heartfelt, touching tribute to and about a friend. Your last line reveals your selflessness, for which I commend you. Hugs, Paul
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/4/2020 12:56:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate this comment.
Date: 3/3/2020 12:57:00 AM
Heartfelt poem, Caren, a loss of a child or anybody for that matter, to die so violently isn't right.. Thank you for my placement , am very honored. Hugs Eve
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/4/2020 12:56:00 AM
Hugs back Eve. You deserved it. Every poem deserved a placement actually.
Date: 3/2/2020 4:22:00 PM
very sad but equally touching, caren...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/4/2020 12:56:00 AM
Thank you Ilene. So glad to see you.
Date: 3/2/2020 2:22:00 PM
Dear Caren, such love you have for your dear sweet friend - such evil to take her young innocent life. I am sure she is right there beside you and living her life through you. God bless her sweet soul. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/4/2020 12:57:00 AM
Thank you Ann. So many young people I have lost. Way too many. I started out at five losing a classmate, and it continued for me.
Date: 3/2/2020 12:27:00 PM
Friends pass, oh yes! As we all will. But I have friends long dead, that are still live to me as the last time I saw them. Love survives death, thank God. Panagiota xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/4/2020 12:57:00 AM
Love does survive death for sure. The flesh is the only part that dies, really just the shell.
Date: 3/2/2020 6:07:00 AM
Wow, Caren! In your memory lives your friend - the best of her. A sad one indeed!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/4/2020 12:58:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Glad you stopped by.

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