Robert Lindley Poet Verse

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New poetry form named: Lind68868
New poetry form: Must describe either 1. a living scene (one that is poetically possible to see), 2. a comparative thought, 3. or a dream.
Poem must list which of the three- this example is number 1.
Must have a Title
Syllable count must be 6,8,8,6,8
Must be 5 lines. 
May be rhymed or written with no rhyme.

Living Blissfully Unawares

Living Blissfully Unawares

she held the golden keys
family picnics on Sundays
green yard, two cars, and a small dog
happy, eternal bliss
soft silk sheets on her king size bed
(1.) (living scene), no rhyme

Robert J. Lindley, 5-10-2019
Poetry form, Lind68868
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28 words
36 syllables
146 characters

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Connie Marcum Wong May 13, 2019 at 9:04 PM I like your form Robert. I shall have to give it a try soon. The great American dream! Lovely! : ) xxoo Robert Lindley May 13, 2019 at 9:30 PM Thank you my dear friend. I hope you do as I know you'd write truly inspiring and fantastic poems using the new form!

Kurt Ravidas May 11, 2019 at 9:52 AM Happy times the poet took away from time. Time wins a poet, but it loses the poetry. Blissful art, Robert. Robert Lindley May 12, 2019 at 7:30 AM Thank you my friend. Yours is a very observant and on the mark comment..

Constance La France May 10, 2019 at 10:27 AM Robert, oh this a lovely example of your created form that I just happen to love, well done ! Robert Lindley May 12, 2019 at 7:29 AM Thank you my dear friend. As I recalled that time, a warm glow embraced this old, tired soul..

Sunlite Wanter May 10, 2019 at 10:19 AM I enjoyed this, Robert. Very close to home. Robert Lindley May 12, 2019 at 7:28 AM Thank you my friend. A snapshot of a time when the cool winds blew fair, the sun gleamed bright and life was a brief spell in paradise..