Living Blissfully Unawares

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New poetry form named: Lind68868
New poetry form: Must describe either 1. a living scene (one that is poetically possible to see), 2. a comparative thought, 3. or a dream.
Poem must list which of the three- this example is number 1.
Must have a Title
Syllable count must be 6,8,8,6,8
Must be 5 lines.
May be rhymed or written with no rhyme.

Living Blissfully Unawares she held the golden keys family picnics on Sundays green yard, two cars, and a small dog happy, eternal bliss soft silk sheets on her king size bed (1.) (living scene), no rhyme Robert J. Lindley, 5-10-2019 Poetry form, Lind68868 this one is 28 words 36 syllables 146 characters

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/13/2019 9:04:00 PM

I like your form Robert. I shall have to give it a try soon. The great American dream! Lovely! : ) xxoo

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/13/2019 9:30:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend. I hope you do as I know you'd write truly inspiring and fantastic poems using the new form!

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/11/2019 9:52:00 AM

Happy times the poet took away from time. Time wins a poet, but it loses the poetry. Blissful art, Robert.

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/12/2019 7:30:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Yours is a very observant and on the mark comment..

Constance La France

Date: 5/10/2019 10:27:00 AM

Robert, oh this a lovely example of your created form that I just happen to love, well done !

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/12/2019 7:29:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend. As I recalled that time, a warm glow embraced this old, tired soul..

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/10/2019 10:19:00 AM

I enjoyed this, Robert. Very close to home.

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/12/2019 7:28:00 AM

Thank you my friend. A snapshot of a time when the cool winds blew fair, the sun gleamed bright and life was a brief spell in paradise..